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Originally posted by Storyteller Here's mine. I'm not comfortable with it yet for many reasons but I still like it . It's about Silhouette (Storyteller Remix). Might just be my first release on my own little label to be. |
RANN told me i should post in here more, so here's a revision of the previous WIP i posted. went with a less intense bass and diff chord structure and feel. kinda loop-ish at the moment, but will be working on transitions and automation
That sounds pretty cool Kadomony, its got that twang that makes me want to eat aunt jemima syrup, btw your logo looks like "blu shit" no offense mang.
I havent made anything in months, im trying to finish this so I can send it in and forget about it. I cant get the bass or the lead to sit well, I gotta run some more passes.
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Originally posted by MSZ I havent made anything in months, im trying to finish this so I can send it in and forget about it. I cant get the bass or the lead to sit well, I gotta run some more passes. |
I agree, basically had to throw some in though - Moshic remix pack. Totally doesnt sound like the original though. The break is poopoo too.
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Originally posted by MSZ I havent made anything in months, im trying to finish this so I can send it in and forget about it. I cant get the bass or the lead to sit well, I gotta run some more passes. |
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Originally posted by Richard Butler This was meant to be deep house but took a bit of a different turn. How is the mix and everything your end? |
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Originally posted by MSZ I agree, basically had to throw some in though - Moshic remix pack. Totally doesnt sound like the original though. The break is poopoo too. |
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Originally posted by evo8 yeah it kinda sounded like that with those samples appearing a bit off if you were keeping it id work from the break which i still think is pretty nice, the progression works |
Either ditch the vocal samples at the beginning or push them down in the mix. As-is, they sound like there's a great track and someone plopped them down on top.
Other than that, I really like this, musically speaking (someone with more knowledge can talk about your mix); it just needs a little more oomph, something that progresses from one phrase to the next and has movement to it.
Good track, don't get me wrong; just needs some little tweaks to push it over the edge into great. Love the bassline.
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Originally posted by deegee Either ditch the vocal samples at the beginning or push them down in the mix. As-is, they sound like there's a great track and someone plopped them down on top. |
Thanks! Need to add some diffusion and lower the levels a bit, gotcha. Its pretty impressive how loud they sound lol. Definitely not close to my best work, just trying to get this one out the door, more work ahead. #shitproducerlife
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Originally posted by MSZ Im trying to brute force this so I can hand it in, some dissonance will remain probably, fuck it doe. Probably what im going to leave it at. Didnt include the breakdown/post but ill leave that the way it was to add contrast and I resampled in some choirs in the ending part, didnt snag that part though. |
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Originally posted by kadomony RANN told me i should post in here more, so here's a revision of the previous WIP i posted. went with a less intense bass and diff chord structure and feel. kinda loop-ish at the moment, but will be working on transitions and automation |
In addition to Richard's remarks I would go for a more donk-ish percussive bass you hear in deephouse often these days. Will add groove and fits better with current style.
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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Awesome Rich. Reminds me of the stuff some higher end clothing stores are playing these days (often a playlist with popular EDM songs). |
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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Right, here we go then. This is going to take absolutely stupid amount of work to get finished, especially because I'm experimenting with some things I've never used before. It'll probably end up being several different parts. |
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Originally posted by Raphie some sound design in progress, want to end up with something tribal / dub techno deep thingy.... not really a song yet, just a jam mixing the elements,finding sweetspots, but you'll get the flavour |
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Originally posted by Richard Butler I can see this as set open type track, but for this to work you will need to lay down top notch sounds because style wise it isn't anything out of the ordinary. For example a not so obvious bass and kik sound. Knowing you you might well pull it off. |
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Originally posted by MSZ Im trying to brute force this so I can hand it in, some dissonance will remain probably, fuck it doe. Probably what im going to leave it at. Didnt include the breakdown/post but ill leave that the way it was to add contrast and I resampled in some choirs in the ending part, didnt snag that part though. |
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Originally posted by Richard Butler Decent groove. As you say you have work to do, if you are interested in my input I would suggest a shorter less loud style of open hat to help the groove along and also really tight drum sounds overall to compliment the bass. The clap is nice n tight. Like the little almost imperceptible vocals in the background. |
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Originally posted by Storyteller In addition to Richard's remarks I would go for a more donk-ish percussive bass you hear in deephouse often these days. Will add groove and fits better with current style. |
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Originally posted by itsamemario Oh and I've talked about tracks so now I can post a new one Here's something I did today, a little different, but it's def. still work in progress. First track that I've recorded like this, and also the first 100% made in Live. Lolpad edition :P Anyways yeah, the intro is kinda whack, I'd been trying to keep the track under 10 mins, and well, the intro is not the best one Ive performed, but all the other tries ending in complete failure, so I guess this will have to do haha :P |
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Originally posted by Richard Butler This was meant to be deep house but took a bit of a different turn. How is the mix and everything your end? |
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Originally posted by Raphie some sound design in progress, want to end up with something tribal / dub techno deep thingy.... not really a song yet, just a jam mixing the elements,finding sweetspots, but you'll get the flavour |
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