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Originally posted by LoveHate of course i'm up for it, what do you have in mind ?

Id like to add some piano chord Layering progression if you fancy it

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Ok so I totally modernised this now, especially the drop leed melody Im done with it

I like it. And respect how much effort you put into your songs.

I didn't really enjoy making that one Gordan, but thanks

I took on feedback and have added a proper bass to this one now;

Is it ok?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I didn't really enjoy making that one Gordan, but thanks I took on feedback and have added a proper bass to this one now; Is it ok?

Nice work. It sounds great to me.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I didn't really enjoy making that one Gordan, but thanks I took on feedback and have added a proper bass to this one now; Is it ok?

its ok i guess, thats all i can come up with

i dont even know what this is, tech-house? just an idea right now...

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Originally posted by evo8 i dont even know what this is, tech-house? just an idea right now...

Very cool shit, evo..

This track cross my mind when i listened yours

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Originally posted by gordan100 Very cool shit, evo.. This track cross my mind when i listened yours

wish my basslines were as good as that!!!

Worked more on this, does not mean it's better now

110BPM?? WTF??? Who wants to take a trip to the 90s?

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Originally posted by evo8 i dont even know what this is, tech-house? just an idea right now...

Nice, just bring in a bass at some point, and I would suggest not having that main lead synth all the time

welcome for all constructive criticism :-)

https://soundcloud.com/mndoubleu/al...mix-4-processed

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Originally posted by mnw479 welcome for all constructive criticism :-) https://soundcloud.com/mndoubleu/al...mix-4-processed

Really not my style of music, but perhaps someone into dubstep can answer you better. I think it needs some work, honestly.



happy with the first part, thinking if i should cut it midway..

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Originally posted by mnw479 welcome for all constructive criticism :-) https://soundcloud.com/mndoubleu/al...mix-4-processed

I like your synth timing and lines - as long as you made them and did not just get them from packs, lol

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred Really not my style of music, but perhaps someone into dubstep can answer you better. I think it needs some work, honestly. happy with the first part, thinking if i should cut it midway..

it could be nice if you dropped out the synth at some stage, have a mini-break then slam back in with some hats/rides, just for some contrast?

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Originally posted by evo8 it could be nice if you dropped out the synth at some stage, have a mini-break then slam back in with some hats/rides, just for some contrast?

Hmm...well I took it out midway, then brought it back in soon after. Does it sound repetitive? It comes in right during/after the break.

A new rap track
hope is 'street' lol

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred Hmm...well I took it out midway, then brought it back in soon after. Does it sound repetitive? It comes in right during/after the break.

just re-listening there, can still hear some sort of synth all the way through? but its up to you thats more of an arrangment/style consideration

one thing i did notice is that the sound is practically mono to my ears, so you could use a bit of chorus here and there or whatever just to make the track sound a little wider/bigger

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Originally posted by evo8 just re-listening there, can still hear some sort of synth all the way through? but its up to you thats more of an arrangment/style consideration one thing i did notice is that the sound is practically mono to my ears, so you could use a bit of chorus here and there or whatever just to make the track sound a little wider/bigger

Think I take it out for a bit, then bring it back during the break (not the 303, but the synth).

Good advice on making the track wider, unfortunately I still wasn't able to use my multitrack unit, so I record everything to two stereo tracks, as usual.

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred Think I take it out for a bit, then bring it back during the break (not the 303, but the synth). Good advice on making the track wider, unfortunately I still wasn't able to use my multitrack unit, so I record everything to two stereo tracks, as usual.

your better starting with most things monos anyway, easier to mix

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Originally posted by evo8 your better starting with most things monos anyway, easier to mix

I've been recording like this since around 2008. I'm trying to save up for a mixer with direct outs, so I can use my multitrack unit.

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred I've been recording like this since around 2008. I'm trying to save up for a mixer with direct outs, so I can use my multitrack unit.

nice

Hi guys, I am not trying to spam, but I haven't really posted much in here for a while. TA is great for a lot of things, but I feel giving feedback via a forum gets tedious. I don't have much good production advice to give the regulars on here, however, if you are one of the long term members who has both given and received feedback with me, I really do like getting DMs on soundcloud (or twitter or FB messenger). I know some people ignore DMs but I really do like receiving notifications! Anyhow, I have gotten to where I exchange feedback through these platforms with collab partners/producer friends almost daily and it works well for me.

Because I am also on other forums with a lot of beginners, I am also starting a new way for me to give a lot of feedback in a way that suits my workflow. Anyone can send a DM to a soundcloud I created for feedback, I will repost all the songs I get and give feedback directly on the waveform. That soundcloud can be found here: https://soundcloud.com/user-694744983

Again, for you guys that I have interacted with for years, you can always send me a message to my personal soundcloud and I will try to respond quickly and it can be a private link. It isn't a bother and it is easier for me through soundcloud than on here.

Thanks for putting up with my long post!

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Originally posted by evo8 i dont even know what this is, tech-house? just an idea right now...

Paul, all of the details on this are beautiful. I am listening through to each hihat, and they all sound so well placed. The kick is so round and full.

I always start thinking of what I could write in on a track, and I think this just needs a lead (or riff or another pad since this is more prog and usually doesn't have a melody per se). But I feel there is some space on top for some more melodic content of some kind to fill it out. But the foundation is there and clean and full.

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred Really not my style of music, but perhaps someone into dubstep can answer you better. I think it needs some work, honestly. happy with the first part, thinking if i should cut it midway..

Has that oldskool, 90's techno, recorded live in one take on analog, kind of feel. I like it overall, it isn't current but it is cool.

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