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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Just a little melodic idea which hunting me for awhile - I guess I'm still not set on this bass line which I believe could be more driving but sounds good (at least for me) so far - lets see if you agree? Darek

It sounds good to me overall production wise, but kind of generic in my opinion. I really like a lot of your works but this one doesn't stand out to me that much.

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Originally posted by Oakenshield i would say its chillout genre i would play this at the start or end of a night prolly end i like the sounds but the break is to long imo and it doesnt climax imo i try and keep of this thread as it distracts me but meh here is one im trying to work on ;D

Overall I think this is pretty good. The kind of arp lead up front gets a little repetitive in my opinion, but the mixing and sound design seem great to me.

I wrote/produced this track and also am on vocals. I don't really know the genre. Maybe dreampop/progressive house or something. Feedback on anything-the songwriting, production, vocals-is appreciated:

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 I wrote/produced this track and also am on vocals. I don't really know the genre. Maybe dreampop/progressive house or something. Feedback on anything-the songwriting, production, vocals-is appreciated:

The vocals are really rough. I'd recommend investing in something like melodyne if you want to use your own vocals. More than anything, you need to practice. The tone isn't very good and you drift in & out of pitch a lot. Often, it sounds like you know the note you're trying to hit, but don't initially hit it, and need to drift to it.

The reverb/delay effect on the vocals too is really distracting and doesn't add anything. The effects in the hook in particular I think just don't suit the song whatsoever. You'd probably get better results if you didn't distort it like that and instead performed it multiple times and layered it. That way you can do imaging in the chorus. Some harmonic content would benefit it too.

If you struggle with pitch you might find it easier to get a pleasing performance by recording the exact same performance many times and layering them with chorus, panning, etc.

I think the lyrics are extremely cheesy but that's kind of canon for this kind of thing. The repeated "this" in the chorus.. idk.

The track itself is totally fine though and would work well if the vocals were greatly improved.

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Originally posted by Seandroid The vocals are really rough. I'd recommend investing in something like melodyne if you want to use your own vocals. More than anything, you need to practice. The tone isn't very good and you drift in & out of pitch a lot. Often, it sounds like you know the note you're trying to hit, but don't initially hit it, and need to drift to it. The reverb/delay effect on the vocals too is really distracting and doesn't add anything. The effects in the hook in particular I think just don't suit the song whatsoever. You'd probably get better results if you didn't distort it like that and instead performed it multiple times and layered it. That way you can do imaging in the chorus. Some harmonic content would benefit it too. If you struggle with pitch you might find it easier to get a pleasing performance by recording the exact same performance many times and layering them with chorus, panning, etc. I think the lyrics are extremely cheesy but that's kind of canon for this kind of thing. The repeated "this" in the chorus.. idk. The track itself is totally fine though and would work well if the vocals were greatly improved.

Thanks for the detailed feedback. I don't have much experience doing vocals at all, and like you say I think I have a lot of practicing to do. I'll probably save this one and either get an experienced/talented vocalist or do them myself if I have better technique later.

Until you pointed it out I didn't realize I ended each phrase of the chorus with "this". I'm going to need to change that.

Caleb, vocals are hard to get right, yours sounds like a classic early attempt.

First off add no effects, just get the raw takes as good as you can. It make take dozens of goes.
I sometimes record each section over and again until ok or just sing out the entire song 10-20 times than comp the best parts together.

I once read Gaga is made to sing a song 50-100 times and her producer then comps the best individual parts.

Next remove all unwanted pops and shit. I often do this with scissors and volume automation.
Also use volume automation and SEVERAL compressors to even out the amplitude.

THEN get into re-pitching using software. Cubase has this built in, don't know if your DAW does?

Then start layering and harmonising (for real or with software)

Then start adding chorus, eq etc etc - build and build slowly

Lastly add in delay and verb but boy these need care.


I'm not a singer so often make the use of short passages only.

PS - another tip > avoid words that don't record so well such as 'thithssss'!!
You will know instinctively when a word is awkward and out of place

updated it played with the arrangement a bit but not sure about the pad

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Originally posted by Seandroid I like the modulated distorted bass. The track as a whole feels a little... wet? Though? There's so much reverb and delay on everything that it hurts the groove a lot. The delayed lead doodad that comes in around 1 minute is a little cheesy in my opinion. There's a lot of stuff to like here though, I like the wobbling subby bass a lot too. And the distorted dark stuff in the break. I think at 2:40 it gets a little busy. Idk though, most of this stuff just depends on what you were actually going for, if you were going for something that sounds totally spaced out, or something groovy. This is what I've got going on right now.

Cool. Seems like something Diplo might play.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Caleb, vocals are hard to get right, yours sounds like a classic early attempt. First off add no effects, just get the raw takes as good as you can. It make take dozens of goes. I sometimes record each section over and again until ok or just sing out the entire song 10-20 times than comp the best parts together. I once read Gaga is made to sing a song 50-100 times and her producer then comps the best individual parts. Next remove all unwanted pops and shit. I often do this with scissors and volume automation. Also use volume automation and SEVERAL compressors to even out the amplitude. THEN get into re-pitching using software. Cubase has this built in, don't know if your DAW does? Then start layering and harmonising (for real or with software) Then start adding chorus, eq etc etc - build and build slowly Lastly add in delay and verb but boy these need care. I'm not a singer so often make the use of short passages only. PS - another tip > avoid words that don't record so well such as 'thithssss'!! You will know instinctively when a word is awkward and out of place

Thanks for the tips! Your techno track is rocking!

Was doing other things while I had Infrared on. Started bouncing so thumbs up!

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Originally posted by Oakenshield updated it played with the arrangement a bit but not sure about the pad

loads of clever work, this really drives!

Note sure about the wailing sine type wave near the middle.

Can you guys give me some feedback on the mix here please.
Lots to do content wise and vocals to add yet


EDIT, made a few improvments

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Originally posted by Richard Butler loads of clever work, this really drives! Note sure about the wailing sine type wave near the middle.

haha i have a love hate with that thing it sounded good in my head but er doesnt any were else il change it to some thing else

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Can you guys give me some feedback on the mix here please. Lots to do content wise and vocals to add yet

something sounds not right with this, im not sure if its overcompression or something

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Originally posted by Robotrance ok im working on an ambient space track and I actually think its finished edit: wow it sounds terrible in mp3 lol, the wav is soo crips compared.

pretty cool!

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Originally posted by Robotrance ok im working on an ambient space track and I actually think its finished edit: wow it sounds terrible in mp3 lol, the wav is soo crips compared.

It sounds great and warm and enjoyable to my ears, lots of proper Jarre type lazers and fx in there, what are you using for these?

thx for the advice on mine, I'm not surprised u and evo mention compression but I have to be honest and say I quite like that pumping compression overload but I did it almost all with volume automation not dynamics.

I am onto to the other things you mention but I have used various widening already so not sure if I can do much more.

Good stuff palm.

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Originally posted by Robotrance - snare too loud - no treble/hihats - too compressed - lack some stereo and reverb efex - great idea/melody, groove and base is really catchy

Is this better mate





your other wip here, good gamers style and great sounds again I cant really say any more

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Is this better mate your other wip here, good gamers style and great sounds again I cant really say any more

I've just noticed I've responded to all your PM's in the last few years, and you've never read any of them

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Originally posted by Robotrance ok working on another one, i think i posted an earlier clip of this previously but theres some progress now. still a mess

im sure i have records here that sound just like that haha sounds so retro but also smooth cool stuff

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Is this better mate your other wip here, good gamers style and great sounds again I cant really say any more

the hats need to be more crisp in a track like that i think

so changed a few things about and got rid of the pad lol is it sounding ok now?

i hope ive made some thing i might release!

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Originally posted by Robotrance ok im working on an ambient space track and I actually think its finished

I like it not a litte; definitely the best work I've ever heard from you - nice, deep and spacey. The only thing I could probably do without is the constant beat (hihat?) in the background. Everything else is perfect. If you can remove it without changing anything else, I'd love to hear it. I'd also consider adding some sci-fi movie/NASA samples, just to see how it would sound, but it's not at all necessary.

Should definitely get it released, or continue to make a full album.

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Originally posted by Oakenshield so changed a few things about and got rid of the pad lol is it sounding ok now? i hope ive made some thing i might release!

The percs are very lacking and do not create any sort of drive like a track of this type needs. It's particularily noticeable when the lead synth hits, because all you can hear is the lead and the beat.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Is this better mate

I don't know if it's because you're going to implement vocals to this or what, but the whole mixdown sounds pretty odd. The percs are pushed in the back, and the whole midrange seems squashed somehow.

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Originally posted by Oakenshield so changed a few things about and got rid of the pad lol is it sounding ok now? i hope ive made some thing i might release!

Mate the sound I mentioned previously comes in around 4 minutes in - a square lead. It adds nothing IMO.
I like the drive and everything but for me it's too harsh in the uppers - but people are saying my DnB tracks lacks in that same department so I'm thinking most people like those powerful sizzling hi's whereas I do not as I find it a harsh listening experience.

I think I am in a minority as I find most commercial tracks sound way to fried egg for me in the hi's but clearly other people love this sound.

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