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reach for teh lazers

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Originally posted by Woony New one, first time using Serum. God damn, that thing is awesome. https://soundcloud.com/woony/untitled100/s-4O8OG

I like this. Really chill and atmospheric. I don't have any other feedback really other than nice song!

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Originally posted by matuto Just an idea im working on

Starting out really nice. I immediately got into the arp. I think the mix could be a bit more balanced. The snare in the snare roll could maybe be a different sample. Overall sounding good so far!

Hey TA! I know this isn't the style of interest of most on this forum but here is a track me and my British m80 Josh Goodwill released. It is up for free download!

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Hey TA! I know this isn't the style of interest of most on this forum but here is a track me and my British m80 Josh Goodwill released. It is up for free download!

Just left my comments on SC for you lol

Darek

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Starting out really nice. I immediately got into the arp. I think the mix could be a bit more balanced. The snare in the snare roll could maybe be a different sample. Overall sounding good so far!

strings could use a notch down about 3k? the clap works but the snare a bit much? I like it man. but what he said about the snare and snare roll a diff sample, just go with some 808s! i think that would really work. but yeah the arp and melody and bass synth and arp synth are spot on, just balance the mix and try to change up that snare. the clap works though.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Just left my comments on SC for you lol Darek

def. not much cup of tea but glad to see you're doing so well making stuff that you like, vocals are really good. the EDM synth stuff seems on point with that genre but it glitches along and doesn't really have much of a groove to me.

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Sounds really nice Richard. Just needs to be developed more I think. Really chill and prog.

LOL!!!

You commented on a demonstration of some patches I made on my JD XA that I accidentally posted in the WIP thread, it was not a track.

Sorry about that.
This is the track I meant to post

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Hey TA! I know this isn't the style of interest of most on this forum but here is a track me and my British m80 Josh Goodwill released. It is up for free download!

Sounds very up to date mate, my next challenge I've had pencilled in is to make something with more up to date melody style and timing like this.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 reach for teh lazers

I've enjoyed some of your latest, but this one is just too basic for my ears mate, such as the timing and sound of the bass and chord stabs.

If you re-do them using more original timing / groove and sounds I would enjoy it I think.

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Originally posted by matuto Just an idea im working on

Like this one, matuto. Very nice, so far.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Here we go guys just a demo for now but_still thinking about adding some smooth and catchy female vocal to it but you can hear the concept already Darek

Nice one, Darek.

My yesterday idea. It sounds a bit messed up to me now

Sound is very clean and pro. It goes nicely up to 1:30, but melody starting at that point does not do the justice to the rest of production imo

[QUOTE]Originally posted by gordan100
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I also have this version, the deep lovers edit, and I prefer this edit personally.

I will do some feedback to others later

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Much, much better.

Gordan if you develop it more I could get my head around it I think.


Is this good enough to send to labels, maybe trance labels? Apart from getting it pro mastered that is.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Gordan if you develop it more I could get my head around it I think. Is this good enough to send to labels, maybe trance labels? Apart from getting it pro mastered that is.

The upper bass and lower mids seem quite recessed; maybe backbus drier signals there.

yea that sounds good you should send it to some labels.

Is it any good?

you might want to lower the cutoff on the pad so it isnt so bright and in your face.....and sidechain it a bit to create pumping effect, and so it sits in the mix better

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Originally posted by gordan100 Is it any good?

What kind of music is your goal?

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Originally posted by MSZ What kind of music is your goal?

It's got to be indie pop trance with a pinch of melancholic I don't know, just doing it for fun

Is this track better for Colours?

All synths analogue, don't know if it shows or not though.

Not mastered

I like it Richard, it may take some serious mixing and mastering to get it to the release level but melodically speaking sounds really solid.

Also around 3+ min mark I would try to slow it down (to half of your BPM) for 16+ bars to make it interesting.

Sound separations will be very big job in this WIP.

Darek

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 I like it Richard, it may take some serious mixing and mastering to get it to the release level but melodically speaking sounds really solid. Also around 3+ min mark I would try to slow it down (to half of your BPM) for 16+ bars to make it interesting. Sound separations will be very big job in this WIP. Darek

Darek you keep saying tracks of mine needs serious mixing, makes me think I must be deaf or something. Can you tell me what you mean real clearly as this comment of yours is bewildering me a lot.

I really made everything sound separate.
Now maybe you mean the bass takes up much bandwith but this is what UK DnB does. Its not like a simple offbeat bass which is easy to fit.

I was looking for an easy wash of sound not some big stuck out plucks. When I check your mixes they don't seem clearer to my ears, or maybe I'm just no good listening properly

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