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Cheers guys but I wonder if the vocal is too loud

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Cheers guys but I wonder if the vocal is too loud

Yes, it's a bit to loud, imo.

Yep, definitely.

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Originally posted by Seandroid Pop song I'm working on 😄 I think I'm gonna rerecord the verses but I'm pretty happy with it so far. Still trying to come up with the right hook yet but yeah. I'm really stoked on the bridge.

Gorgeous, but the sub may be a tad too intense for pop perhaps?

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Dare I publish this political track? This will be offensive to liberal types. I'm liberal in the true sense of the word, but cannot stand the new breed of intolerant liberal toy throwers that seem to be everywhere

Ha, this would fit in perfect with the prog house from 15 years ago, fun stuff.

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Originally posted by gordan100 Glad you like it Thanks! Structure definitely needs more work. I'm still not sure about part that starts at 1:15, sometimes i have a feeling that some tones of that melody are displaced, and that it clash with piano starting at 1:50. Then again, sometimes i have a feeling that piano is displaced Edit... did some changes after this post, i think it's better now

best ive heard from you in a while Gordan, sounds like old prog stuff, not forced, that gated synth sound really makes it, great job! ill have a proper listen tonight to nitpick

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Originally posted by evo8 best ive heard from you in a while Gordan, sounds like old prog stuff, not forced, that gated synth sound really makes it, great job! ill have a proper listen tonight to nitpick

hehe, thanks!

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Originally posted by gordan100 hehe, thanks!

yeah mate thats killer in my headphones, the gated sound sits really well, whether thats reverb or whatever its perfect
love the kick and bass, it just works and thats all that matters anyway

So can u notice some difference......... is this a nice sound palette and mix?

I made every sound here using only my analog synth, that includes the hats, kik, everything

I cant tell if its worth finnishing as I made it and can never judge my own shit

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Originally posted by Richard Butler So can u notice some difference......... is this a nice sound palette and mix? I made every sound here using only my analog synth, that includes the hats, kik, everything I cant tell if its worth finnishing as I made it and can never judge my own shit

Sounds good, Richard. If you develop it further it may be cool.


I have another one, not happy with some stuff, like string melody or melody timing... and some instruments... and some parts of structure... and maybe it's just complete rubbish, don't know yet. But since i'm shameless i'll put it here right away.

I like that one Gordan, you have a dark touch in your dance music

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Originally posted by Richard Butler So can u notice some difference......... is this a nice sound palette and mix? I made every sound here using only my analog synth, that includes the hats, kik, everything I cant tell if its worth finnishing as I made it and can never judge my own shit

the hihat sounds really thin and over EQd. sounds way to loud the 10-20 kHz area

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Originally posted by Richard Butler So can u notice some difference......... is this a nice sound palette and mix? I made every sound here using only my analog synth, that includes the hats, kik, everything I cant tell if its worth finnishing as I made it and can never judge my own shit

its a bit sharp sounding to my ears Rich

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Originally posted by evo8 its a bit sharp sounding to my ears Rich

Howz it now?

Placeholder vocals

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Howz it now? Placeholder vocals

Sounds fine to me. Just don't overuse that melody you have


Some quickie ambient

I will check yours later Gordan

Hows this coming on

Honestly I think it sounds sexy - I like the bass a lot, hope you fukkers do

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I will check yours later Gordan Hows this coming on Honestly I think it sounds sexy - I like the bass a lot, hope you fukkers do

listening on my ue boom, the bass isnt really coming through but i think its cos its more of a deep bass, the plucks are taking up a lot of space maybe thats why

Got to stop doing this, and get back to real life. Just one more

It's to much in sub area, i presume. Bat cave?

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Originally posted by gordan100 Got to stop doing this, and get back to real life. Just one more It's to much in sub area, i presume. Bat cave?

not gone on those melodic sounds really, you can do better

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Originally posted by evo8 not gone on those melodic sounds really, you can do better

Hey, thanks for listening and i'm glad you think that i can

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Originally posted by gordan100 Got to stop doing this, and get back to real life. Just one more It's to much in sub area, i presume. Bat cave?

I LIKE THIS BAT CAVE BASS

if YOU COULD REPLACE THOSE HARSH PIANO STABS WITH A NICE DEEP HOUSE STAB

I want to send this one out so if you can help me with any 'advices' that would cool
For example is the verse after the first drop too short?
And the second drop too repetitive?

A couple od people asked me what the JD XA is like

Here's a quick demo I just made of some pluks I made from scratch - on board fx only

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I want to send this one out so if you can help me with any 'advices' that would cool For example is the verse after the first drop too short? And the second drop too repetitive?

the kick is not right here imo, needs more of a heavy punch i think!

first thing ive done in ages

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