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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Lots of lush tones going on. Not much I can add from the others but yes, keep at this one fer sure ------------------------------------- I have no idea what this is or even what genre to put it in. Very raw wip atm with some placeholders still in. Had to make a composition change and not sure if I like it this way or the other way..lol |
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Originally posted by gordan100 The beginning is very nice, floaty pad and arp... tbh i would get rid of piano melody and try something else instead... |
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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Ugh! Nothing on the Master! |
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Originally posted by SystematicX1 I have no idea what this is or even what genre to put it in. Very raw wip atm with some placeholders still in. Had to make a composition change and not sure if I like it this way or the other way..lol |
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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Vary up those drums and you've got yourself a progressive breaks track. I would also suggest trying out some different samples, as those drum hits sound strangely lo-fi. |
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Originally posted by Woony Latest one from me, another one that sounds a bit progsbreaks-ish, I think... |
still needs some work and also a final mixdown but any thoughts are welcome
thanks
chris
Commenting on the fly - clean with good sound separation, dynamic and nicely control levels, interesting sounds selection with sweet sublime melodic theme - drums are doing justice for this type of genre but I would add occasionally some complex pattern to it.
Overall had good listening experience man, nice work.
Darek
A very solid basis for a track, but definitely needs something more. No idea what that something would be, though.
And like Darek said, some drum fills every now and then to break the pattern.
This is my latest WIP work and has to be done on headphones so I'm not really sure if I was able to get to proper levels and dynamics - how that's sound for you guys? (just dry sound, no fillers, drops, FX, ....)
Darek
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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Commenting on the fly - clean with good sound separation, dynamic and nicely control levels, interesting sounds selection with sweet sublime melodic theme - drums are doing justice for this type of genre but I would add occasionally some complex pattern to it. Overall had good listening experience man, nice work. Darek |
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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery A very solid basis for a track, but definitely needs something more. No idea what that something would be, though. And like Darek said, some drum fills every now and then to break the pattern. |
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Originally posted by TranceLover007 This is my latest WIP work and has to be done on headphones so I'm not really sure if I was able to get to proper levels and dynamics - how that's sound for you guys? (just dry sound, no fillers, drops, FX, ....) Darek |
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Originally posted by chris marsh cheers dude. Any ideas whats missing? I dont want to add too much as it needs to be a minimal track that relies on drums and bass really, but im hoping fills, incidental sounds, maybe some FX will be enough. what do you think? c |
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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery I really can't say, it just needs that little extra "something," you know. What you just said there could very well do the trick. I also usually don't really want to say what I'd do or want to hear, since I don't want to influence others' piece of work too much. |
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Originally posted by TranceLover007 This is my latest WIP work and has to be done on headphones so I'm not really sure if I was able to get to proper levels and dynamics - how that's sound for you guys? (just dry sound, no fillers, drops, FX, ....) Darek |
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Originally posted by chris marsh still needs some work and also a final mixdown but any thoughts are welcome thanks chris |
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Originally posted by evo8 imo Darek its ok, not as interesting as your previous stuff..... |
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Originally posted by chris marsh this is a lovely track darek IMO. What cans are you mixing on? have you got any speakers at all ATM? Is this completely dry IE no reverbs? sounds like you have some delays on there already? the harmonies and ARPS are all really excellent IMO its got some really great musicality to it I feel like the drums need more punch and the kick and snare need to punch through the mix little more. Personally i would like to feel a bit more drive form the drums like maybe a more driving hi hat pattern at some point or extra percussion layers but i suppose that would change the feel of the track. seems like the drums dont have the same drive as the synths presently but maybe thats what you are going for seems like you have all the basic sounds well balanced, but it just needs that final push and mixdown, and in this style of music using the tight kind of reverb/wet fx would probably make a world of difference |
defo finish it mate!
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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Thanks Chris for your lengthy respond, appreciate man - so to answer your question about my headphones, yes I only had to use headphones and they are new to me so don't have good feel for them yet (will take some time), as far as dry sound I meant that there is nothing on master channel - also agree with you on the face that drums need to have more punch and some drive to it as right now they are a bit to static and not moving enough for me - good catch. I decided to add a bit more melodic development to this WIP: Darek |
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Originally posted by evo8 did you tweak the bassline? made a big difference and the melodies are more prominent now, im starting to like it! |
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Originally posted by evo8 agree with Mr Mystery, its missing some kind of motif or maybe some vocals would actually work listening again i hear some kind of lead around the 4 min mark, i would bring this forward and develop a little more or something, also i would introduce it a lot earlier also around 3:40 there is a cool kind of sound that you could maintain, needs to brought forward also my 2c |
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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Thanks Chris for your lengthy respond, appreciate man - so to answer your question about my headphones, yes I only had to use headphones and they are new to me so don't have good feel for them yet (will take some time), as far as dry sound I meant that there is nothing on master channel - also agree with you on the face that drums need to have more punch and some drive to it as right now they are a bit to static and not moving enough for me - good catch. I decided to add a bit more melodic development to this WIP: Darek |
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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Darek |
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