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Originally posted by Evolve140

I enjoyed the video - I actually like it best when the track was just based around that deep synth with not much else going on.

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Originally posted by rubez i have graduated to the big leagues.

lol

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any criticisms? what is missing? (apart from drums)

This is actually sounding really, really nice. I really like it. Add some hats and other perc. some breaks and some filtering of the sytnh part and weaving it in and out, and you have yourself a fine track right there.

I'd say that track is pretty perfect Alpha, nice work.



Revision 2.5: its still has incoherent transitions still debating where to take it from here; maybe scrap the intro.

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Originally posted by MSZ I'd say that track is pretty perfect Alpha, nice work.

Thanks, dude. Wasn't sure about structure and a few other things, doing it live again, but I guess I'll leave it and move on.

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Revision 2: its still incoherent, doesnt make sense and has no flow. Gonna rest on this one for a bit.

As I mentioned before, I still like the beginning and now that you developed it a bit more, I like it even more. It's relatively simple, but has a nice flow...although I'm still not sure about the synth that comes in after 1:30 or so. It may work, but perhaps introduce it in a better way? Not sure. If you're feeling stuck, resting on it may not be a bad idea, or just finish it.

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Originally posted by MSZ Revision 2.5: its still has incoherent transitions still debating where to take it from here; maybe scrap the intro.

I'd say that's nearly finished, just add an intro and it's good to go. Pretty solid - nothing fancy, but groovy and decent and flows much better.


Feel like this needs work, but not sure it's worth redoing. Maybe better to just leave as is?

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred I'd say that's nearly finished, just add an intro and it's good to go. Pretty solid - nothing fancy, but groovy and decent and flows much better.

Thanks im probably gonna dump it, I see the errors, its too washed out in general. Something that would save it is some mono contrast dry shit, but I dont think It will get there. New project time.

And honestly, cant give you any feedback on your music so I wont even try.

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Originally posted by MSZ And honestly, cant give you any feedback on your music so I wont even try.

I hear you. I went for a more dj friendly, happy 90's vibe with this one, think I want to leave as is:

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred I hear you. I went for a more dj friendly, happy 90's vibe with this one, think I want to leave as is:

definitely feeling the 90s manchester rave vibes with this one.

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Originally posted by LoveHate definitely feeling the 90s manchester rave vibes with this one.

Thanks for listening. Not sure about the flow and structure, but hopefully it works...

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Will be checking out tracks here in a couple of hours with a nice cool beer In the meantime, I've worked a lot on this prog trance track, hope you like

this might be my favorite track of yours that you ever done, reminds me of prog trance from the mid 00's

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred Thanks for listening. Not sure about the flow and structure, but hopefully it works...

yeah just seems like an idea right now, some structure might do it good though, as far as just an intro maybe lead up to that 303 thing.

the flow is good though, it has an evolving thing going on.

^ the buildup part at 55 seconds on is pretty busy, should probably simplify that somehow.



New wip, still trying to get in form.

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Originally posted by MSZ ^ the buildup part at 55 seconds on is pretty busy, should probably simplify that somehow. New wip, still trying to get in form.

the lower mids sound like they are clipping a little, i would employ a cut somewhere from 200-800 on the mixes or on the channels with this content to see if it clears up the mix a little
nice vibe tho

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Originally posted by LoveHate

not bad, not sure its the right kick for this track, also the vocal seems out of time in places?

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred I hear you. I went for a more dj friendly, happy 90's vibe with this one, think I want to leave as is:

hard to give fb on this, not the kind of music i ever listen to but......respect for making what you like

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Originally posted by LoveHate yeah just seems like an idea right now, some structure might do it good though, as far as just an intro maybe lead up to that 303 thing. the flow is good though, it has an evolving thing going on.

Thanks, yeah I guess I'll leave it as I've already moved on. Hopefully it's something that can be mixed in, if someone ever decides to play it.

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Originally posted by evo8 hard to give fb on this, not the kind of music i ever listen to but......respect for making what you like

Everyone should make what they like. I want to do other styles too, but I always end up making techno-ish stuff...

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Originally posted by LoveHate

Hey I'd like to work on this with you, if you're up for it, if not, no worries.

Like

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Hey I'd like to work on this with you, if you're up for it, if not, no worries. Like

of course i'm up for it, what do you have in mind ?

Really quick loop, trying to get my Deepchord-ripoffs right

like how it sounds so far...




Good stuff




It's a good base, i'm interested to hear progress..




I had a period of listening similar style 20 years ago, like what your'e doing.

This is early mix... It needs more content for sure.

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Originally posted by Woony Really quick loop, trying to get my Deepchord-ripoffs right

Nice n deep chords but too much hiss for me

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Originally posted by gordan100 This is early mix... It needs more content for sure.

I like but I would want the drums more up front personally

Ok so I totally modernised this now, especially the drop leed melody

Im done with it

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