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New Pre mix wip track Im working on. Still unsure on the composition as I switched melodies from the end to the middle arrangement. Not sure if it's blending right though.

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 New Pre mix wip track Im working on. Still unsure on the composition as I switched melodies from the end to the middle arrangement. Not sure if it's blending right though.

i kinda like the melodies and stuff but the drums and bass would need a lot of work

Thanks for the reply Evo..
What are you picking up on the drums...sounded decent (for a pre mix) to me..but,what are you hearing

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 New Pre mix wip track Im working on. Still unsure on the composition as I switched melodies from the end to the middle arrangement. Not sure if it's blending right though.

Sounds nice n shiny, good melodies. I agree bass n drums need some thought, but I'm not sure what !

I've nearly finished this, and am working with a couple of vocalists on this, so for now just my random vocal idea is a place holder

Richard, how we are not hearing you on the radio is beyond me.
Such a cool track and the current placeholder, imho is just fine and very well suited.
Loving that post effect on the delay.

Mix seems a little cloudy and I am getting some clip on the bass just fyi

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Richard, how we are not hearing you on the radio is beyond me. Such a cool track and the current placeholder, imho is just fine and very well suited. Loving that post effect on the delay. Mix seems a little cloudy and I am getting some clip on the bass just fyi

Yes the mix, grrrr

Thinking of getting it pro mixed maybe...

Just by chance I recently did a bunch of business with these top new signed UK artists, and am hoping I might get one to sing on this, we will see...

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 Thanks for the reply Evo.. What are you picking up on the drums...sounded decent (for a pre mix) to me..but,what are you hearing

dont know what you mean by pre-mix but just they are very quiet, the kick is hardly punching through at all
bassline isnt driving the track on, its missing a lot of depth

however if you havent mixed the track then you can disregard my comments

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Originally posted by SystematicX1 New Pre mix wip track Im working on. Still unsure on the composition as I switched melodies from the end to the middle arrangement. Not sure if it's blending right though.

Sounds are nice but it lacks some drive. Not really hooked on melody :|

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Originally posted by Richard Butler I've nearly finished this, and am working with a couple of vocalists on this, so for now just my random vocal idea is a place holder

This could be a pop hit, Richard.

Melody at 1:16 sounds like i have steal it from somewhere

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Originally posted by gordan100 Melody at 1:16 sounds like i have steal it from somewhere

The aesthetic of the lead reminds me of Way out west - future perfect which is a nice thing, I think maybe you can build a better track around it, I cant tell much on these headphones but it sounds well mixed though.

Can I get some suggestions on this? It still needs to be eq'd mixed and leveled but a remix I started today, got a bunch done in one sitting but the whole things seems very below-average and there is nothing special about it. There is no real bassline. The arp and the distorted end piece of the breakdown are from the remix pack, I dont think I can make it not-trancey.

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Originally posted by MSZ I dont think I can make it not-trancey.

There's a killer breaks track in there somewhere.

I don't know, I don't really have any suggestions... other than that it sounds too fast for me.

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Originally posted by MSZ Can I get some suggestions on this? It still needs to be eq'd mixed and leveled but a remix I started today, got a bunch done in one sitting but the whole things seems very below-average and there is nothing special about it. There is no real bassline. The arp and the distorted end piece of the breakdown are from the remix pack, I dont think I can make it not-trancey.

kick has no low end punch, was waiting for it to drop in but it never did, just need to fix that and some sort of simple bassline to make it groove along - yeah it will need some EQ as muddy in places, i like the overall sound though

probably going have to throw it away and track something new to accommodate for a decent bassline, I also realized the track was boring as shit(happens too often). Thanks for the feedback.

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Originally posted by evo8

Love the chords, bass, woman sample voice, arps. But didn't hear the peak of the track yet. Needs to go a bit stronger after break at 2:48, imo.

Second attempt

This is nothing yet, but sounds cool to me

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Originally posted by gordan100 This is nothing yet, but sounds cool to me

I like where this one is going, main thing I think it could use is another "foreground" element, lots of nice subtle stuff complimenting your main synth line, but you need a second stand out thing or variation I think somewhere in there.

Heres a new one I am working on (again with the scifi theme)

Now that is great. Very Jarre-like.

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Originally posted by djnitride Heres a new one I am working on (again with the scifi theme)

Sounds very nice so far. Good atmosphere, nice sounds, i like it.

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Originally posted by gordan100 This is nothing yet, but sounds cool to me

this could be cool if you used those synth parts for the break and then dropped in a dirty electro style bassline? just an idea! i like that synth there

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