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attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...

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Originally posted by evo8 attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...

Nice, no crits just personal preference wanting louder bass



Was wondering if the break here sounds out of place? Was thinking maybe it needs more signifier of a drop? Watch out its loud as fuck.

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Originally posted by MSZ Nice, no crits just personal preference wanting louder bass Was wondering if the break here sounds out of place? Was thinking maybe it needs more signifier of a drop? Watch out its loud as fuck.

The position of the break doesn't sound out of place to me, but the loud noise does kick in pretty fast once the break starts, so its kinda like "break for a second or two and noise".

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After listening to it a few more times I do think the build could be a bit louder / have a bit more noise which could make the break less jarring in terms of noise. So even though you build up with higher volume levels / noise, it still sounds like a break while having that noise that rolls off of the build.

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Originally posted by MSZ Nice, no crits just personal preference wanting louder bass Was wondering if the break here sounds out of place? Was thinking maybe it needs more signifier of a drop? Watch out its loud as fuck.

Yes thats what i'm talking about, good shit.

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Originally posted by MSZ Nice, no crits just personal preference wanting louder bass Was wondering if the break here sounds out of place? Was thinking maybe it needs more signifier of a drop? Watch out its loud as fuck.

thanks for the comment, i did actually think that bass needed to come up more so that confirms it for me!

the break is ok in your track, i just cant get past the distorted sound. Love the bassline, very mean and dark...

Nigga please, im like the cross of skrillex and deadmau5 divided by kasey taylor and multiplied by airwave.

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Originally posted by evo8 attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...

Really nice track. Im not that fond of the kick. Sounds abit to muddy, but other then that. Great work

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Originally posted by MSZ Nigga please, im like the cross of skrillex and deadmau5 divided by kasey taylor and multiplied by airwave.

You sure are man, I 'll follow you to even death friend, watch this.

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Originally posted by PaULiN0 You sure are man, I 'll follow you to even death friend, watch this.

Cool man, maybe you'll learn something and stop re-creating the same track over and over again.

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Originally posted by MSZ Cool man, maybe you'll learn something and stop re-creating the same track over and over again.

Which one's the same lol?

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Originally posted by djnitride Not sure if anyone ever posts non EDM in here but what the heck . Im not great at being objective or critical with dance music, but Id love to give feedback on more ambient type stuff. Plan on making a 4-6 minute version of the track with some field recordings I will be taking at the beach in a few weeks and maybe get my brother to take some during his trip to Spain/Ibiza soon, but this is the basic idea for the track. Going for a dark, warm, loungey beach vibe. Tear it to shreds only way I will improve.

The oceanic background is really nice. The background pad is also very lush and warm. The bass goes well with everything and its also well mixed but when it reaches the lead at the end of the intro it just takes everything into a different kind of journey. You should try to change it to go with and compliment the great atmosphere you have going on, cheers.

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Originally posted by evo8 attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...

For sure nailed the vibe. Good stuff here man, old school house feel.
I do agree on the kick,not that it sounds muddy but it could use more lower frequency. Maybe even a sub under the kick,not alot...just a good presence. Do tell when it's finished!

Ok...so after months of getting on to this bass kick I have decided to give a go at a Trance track. It's been probably 10 years since I have even attempted to make one but thought it would be a good change of pace.
This is a true WIP in it's raw state. Thoughts?

hey guys. newest production! yeah, last track I posted was pretty lame, but it was a step forward as I'm trying to get on my feet in the deep house area.

https://soundcloud.com/fallisjesse/huse7

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Originally posted by scorpradio Ok...so after months of getting on to this bass kick I have decided to give a go at a Trance track. It's been probably 10 years since I have even attempted to make one but thought it would be a good change of pace. This is a true WIP in it's raw state. Thoughts?

Yeah this is awsome, you def have some skill in the trance area genre and you should keep at it. This is warm nice and lush. Mixing sounds good and proper, waiting to hear what the rest will sound like.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 hey guys. newest production! yeah, last track I posted was pretty lame, but it was a step forward as I'm trying to get on my feet in the deep house area. https://soundcloud.com/fallisjesse/huse7

I like, has a mysterious yet dancey vibe.

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Originally posted by scorpradio Ok...so after months of getting on to this bass kick I have decided to give a go at a Trance track. It's been probably 10 years since I have even attempted to make one but thought it would be a good change of pace. This is a true WIP in it's raw state. Thoughts?

Nice synth work and bass, but as the drums are I'd suggest a more original hat and clap.

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Originally posted by evo8 attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...

Love the grimey feel you get and I like the kick as is. This could be a decent track.

MSZ\ I cannot play your track it says its private?

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Here's another WIP where I need a classy vocalist, anyone know one who might want to sing on this?

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Originally posted by scorpradio Ok...so after months of getting on to this bass kick I have decided to give a go at a Trance track. It's been probably 10 years since I have even attempted to make one but thought it would be a good change of pace. This is a true WIP in it's raw state. Thoughts?

I think it is good so far. The hihat and clap are a bit dated sounding to my ear and the white noise sweep too loud. The direction it is going with the arp coming in near the end seems like the rest of the song could develop into something nice.

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Originally posted by evo8 attempting to continue this laid back sound of the past couple of weeks...

I really like the sound design and mixing on this (like other songs you post) very quality, good stereo spread. I don't have any critique except to build it out. Like the sub on this too, the 3 notes then pause for a few seconds.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Love the grimey feel you get and I like the kick as is. This could be a decent track. MSZ\ I cannot play your track it says its private? ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Here's another WIP where I need a classy vocalist, anyone know one who might want to sing on this?

Sounds nice, hope you finish this and some other ones you have posted before.

Stuck in Climax i need helpzors.

Thanks for the feedback you guys...still working on it!

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Originally posted by clay you should use more samples from the matrix movie.

Sorry but I could only volume 1 clips, will rip the others tho.

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Originally posted by PaULiN0 Stuck in Climax i need helpzors.

Put some sort of a lead over it.

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