Originally posted by evo8
i kinda like it Darek, has a nice feel. Not sure about that saw-ish midbass, maybe something smoother would be better for the feel of the track?
i dont think the piano is necessary, theres kinda too many things going on then
Yeah, I'm going for progressive Chill-House vibe with emotional and catchy sub-melodic theme so this piano help me create this desired effect - as far as bass line, I will check if slight different take on it would properly coexist with everything around - thank man!!!
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Originally posted by Oakenshield
i like the idear and when the piano comes in it gives it a flowing feel BUT the percusion does not seem to drive the track infact i think that it drowns out some of the main elements.
cut back on ur perc and bring the piano up, less is more(yes im guilty of this )
Appreciate your honest opinion man - at this point, as far as drums concern, I wasn't looking for a drive (as compere to Trance) as much as for give a sense of smooth chilling rhythm/vibe in this production.
I definitely going after nice and balance progressive structure and sound which will have to evolve over the time -> and at the same time I believe that female vocal would spice up this track even more by adding this extra spark to it lol.
Cheers,
Darek
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It has some nice flavor to it, me like it so far -> also I think that slightly different kick would do more justice for this production with those particular sound/s selection you already have -> as far as vocal?, works nicely as it is in your structure.
Got some potential even in EDM area lol
Darek
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Lets start finally with this Trance track lol - it has some nice melodic development and drives really well (need to be mix/mastered properly in order to meet today standards) - I would suggest (if you care) to start your track from around 1:00 mark till 3:15 then again from 4:15 till the end - the rest is not needed (in my view).
If is done the right way then you could have some really strong production on the hand
Cheers,
Darek
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Originally posted by AlphaStarred
It sounds pretty good, but you're only using 3 patterns for the entire track, making it very repetitive rather quickly. It could work as a dj tool, but I'd try adding some more percussion and some more variation.
Yeah, I tried.. but couldn't really come up with anything that didn't make the track worse. I'm trying to get better at more diverse programming but I hate this micro-editing kind of shit so i'd rather iterate fast than spend forever on one track.
Nice one :3 Listening to your last wips there seems to be lack of definition & seperation in your sounds and mix, if you're going for that then dont mind that comment because I can also respect that; it sounds true to the older stuff this way and you might be referencing those sounds currently.
Originally posted by MSZ
Nice one :3 Listening to your last wips there seems to be lack of definition & seperation in your sounds and mix, if you're going for that then dont mind that comment because I can also respect that; it sounds true to the older stuff this way and you might be referencing those sounds currently.
yeah im not looking for "loud" for this style really - just something relaxing on the ear
I use a tape plugin on the master to soften the mix overall
this mix however, think i overdid the low end which is effectively making the mids/highs sound quieter, will get back to this tomorrow night hopefully!
Originally posted by Woony
Yeah, I tried.. but couldn't really come up with anything that didn't make the track worse. I'm trying to get better at more diverse programming but I hate this micro-editing kind of shit so i'd rather iterate fast than spend forever on one track.
yep - im with you on working fast. Your sound will develop as you go. i think your on the right track, less is more, imo anyway
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even in EDM area lol
