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TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
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quote: | Originally posted by optik
I've been trying to make this track work for ages.. should I just bin it?
it's one of those ones - I think I like it, I think I like the melody, and whenever I listen to it after leaving it for a while, i think I should fix it up and get it out there - but I might just be deluding myself.
It's trance - 135bpm
what do you guys think/
anything that might fix it? or is it objectively decent/shit? |
Toby, this is some serious stuff my friend - melody line is simply sublime and works pretty sweet in this track -> but I'm still not fully sold on your low freq bass line, it is too (let's say) boomy (at least for me), you can either EQ it a bit or cut some freq from it and allow you mid-range to breath through it a bit more - if this make any sense - your mid and high bass will drive your energy and create this vibe in your track - overall excellent work man
Cheers,
Darek
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Jan-30-2015 19:45
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deegee
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Registered: Dec 2014
Location: Toronto, Canada
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quote: | Originally posted by optik
I've been trying to make this track work for ages.. should I just bin it?
it's one of those ones - I think I like it, I think I like the melody, and whenever I listen to it after leaving it for a while, i think I should fix it up and get it out there - but I might just be deluding myself.
It's trance - 135bpm
what do you guys think/
anything that might fix it? or is it objectively decent/shit? |
This is fantastic. I have no idea if it was on purpose, but all the way up until the big build back into the track (4:15), all the different little melodic bits sounded very slightly off. Partly it was rhythm, partly it was tonality, but something wasn't quite meshing.
But then 4:15 hits and suddenly everything resolves beautifully. Definitely adds to the euphoric nature of the track--don't change anything about the melodic structure at all. It works perfectly.
The only strutural nitpick I have is at 1:11--you need a little bit more of a transition there, I think. Feels too abrupt and unexpected.
Other people can comment on mixing, not my forte. Excellent, excellent track.
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Jan-30-2015 21:21
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Domesty
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quote: | Originally posted by optik
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I really like it. Maybe the 1:50-> lead is little bit overwhelming and timing doesn't quite click for me but nevertheless past that point its awesome!
quote: | Originally posted by Innocence Lost
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The sub bass seems to be hanging around a bit too much. Sounds like there isn't enough "downtime" on the very low end.
quote: | Originally posted by Raphie
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Same goes for me as optik said. Dig the elemnts, but maybe just a little too dry vocal. Overall feeling still holds up though.
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Jan-31-2015 01:26
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