|Originally posted by madmuso |
So, ive canned the other track, common feedback was that its dated, not gonna waste any more time on it, maybe one day I can use parts of it for something else, in the meantime, onto other songs!
Heres another ive been re working. To be honest, I dont even know what genre this really fits into it, I come from a classical and Rock background originaly (please dont roll your eyes!) so im not really up to speed with all the sub genres in the electronic world, all I know is I start creating and these are the things that come out.
feedback away! thanks guys,
The big problem here is that every single section is just way too long, except for the melody section which just comes in and disappears.
The entire intro up to and including the first break seems completely pointless, because it builds up to nothing, after which you get a section that is essentially just a second intro. The main melody appears when the song is already seven minutes in, which is when most songs are already ending.
There's no tension or release to justify the length of the track.
Last edited by Mr.Mystery on Feb-12-2015 at 04:26