quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
My newest attempt to make something listenable
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its ok, few things stand out
the pluck sound, whilst being really nice, is just way too loud in comparison to everything else - therefore your mix is unbalanced. Its ok to have it upfront but you went too far
hard to judge but reduce it by 3db and see how that sounds
you could do with some sort of bassline - something simple, just use some of the notes from the pluck sound - obviously play them down an octave lower
actually - you bring in another kick at 2:36 ish? that sounds nice but then you get rid of it - should keep that in, use this section as your track - everythings sounds balanced there, the pluck sound is balanced
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