Originally posted by TranceLover007
No, mate, is still available but only over here on TA site as this is only private track on SoundCloud and not visible to anyone over there.
Cheers,
Darek
ah...my apologies, chrome decided it wouldnt display the widget so got it in IE
yeah, nice! im liking that after the break, its grooving nicely, nice space there!!! and the progression is nice, i like that
just the synth in the break, its a bit plain?? i can hear the reverb on it but for me it could do with a bit more bite or something, its just a bit bland IMHO
- first two "leads" is in C
- baseline is in F
- some of the efex is in A
this slightly indicates an F major but it totaly doesnt seem to be intentional, especially when more and more elements later on seems to be in C & D, and the break being in some Eminor scale. Complete mess if you ask me. Did u just press all the white keys on random?
May-01-2013 14:37
TranceLover007
DariusX
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Location: Seattle, USA
Re: For the lack of off-topic thread posting here:
quote:
Originally posted by Vernon Wanderer
and it's not like they're really ableton.
- is that bad or good Patrick ????
Darek
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May-01-2013 17:18
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
quote:
Originally posted by evo8
ah...my apologies, chrome decided it wouldnt display the widget so got it in IE
yeah, nice! im liking that after the break, its grooving nicely, nice space there!!! and the progression is nice, i like that
just the synth in the break, its a bit plain?? i can hear the reverb on it but for me it could do with a bit more bite or something, its just a bit bland IMHO
Thanks man, appreciate - yah, this pluck in the break will have some face lift in the short future as I also find it to weak or not too punchy/aggressive for my taste but I'm glad that you like this WIP so far
Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Alrighttty, fixed a lot of things and here you go.
Sorry mate, I have to agree with clay on this - there is nothing coherent or gluing all of those instruments together at the moment so I would spend as much time as possible to work on this aspect in your track - my 2 cents mate.
Darek
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Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Alrighttty, fixed a lot of things and here you go.
yes it sounds wrong because, as mentioned the parts or all in different keys
This is partly because you've stuck different synth loops from sample cds together right?
Perhaps stop trying to finish complete tracks and focus on learning for a bit - like learn some music theory, learn about making sounds, study some tracks you like and maybe have a go at recreating them etc?
Im not an expert but im confident that this will help
Originally posted by clay
- first two "leads" is in C
- baseline is in F
- some of the efex is in A
this slightly indicates an F major but it totaly doesnt seem to be intentional, especially when more and more elements later on seems to be in C & D, and the break being in some Eminor scale. Complete mess if you ask me. Did u just press all the white keys on random?
Originally posted by chris marsh
yes it sounds wrong because, as mentioned the parts or all in different keys
This is partly because you've stuck different synth loops from sample cds together right?
Perhaps stop trying to finish complete tracks and focus on learning for a bit - like learn some music theory, learn about making sounds, study some tracks you like and maybe have a go at recreating them etc?
Im not an expert but im confident that this will help
Chris
No loops this time and i tried going with the c major scale with white keys only
Originally posted by evo8
heres another techno one from me, trying to go darker and slightly more twisted, just roughly sketched out at the moment
edit: sorry, i should have cut a few minutes off that before i uploaded :-/
Like it so far has a good direction, don't fuck it up! No suggestions here would need to see how you finish it to tell if i put on it my A mark or decide you fucked it up :P