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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Been wanting to make something with some Dream Pop influences:

the start is repetitive and takes to long to get going but it sounds good 2:20 and on. maybe add a few transitions in the first part to help build it.

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Originally posted by optik as it's called trance addict!

i still have tunes like this on record one of them called into the void i love the way it drives through you making you want to move

any tips on how you got ur bass sounding that nice what filters did y6ou use?

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Originally posted by Evolve140 here we go, finally got a chance to upload.

i love the feeling in this sounds like "sitting in the sun in Ibizza sun going down" i love music like that its got a heart!

oh and the bass sounds epic on my cab units i shows me i have a long way to go

well been reworking my 90's feel tune and im starting to like it

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i still have tunes like this on record one of them called into the void i love the way it drives through you making you want to move

any tips on how you got ur bass sounding that nice what filters did y6ou use?

the key is very little, just a sidechain. but the bass-sounds are tweaked presets in massive and trillian; nothing fancy. They fit the bassdrums used in key, which is the main thing.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 here we go, finally got a chance to upload.

I like this a lot, really well produced. I like the arrangement also, nothing seems too repetitive or over done, the 7mins just passes by

I'm on my 3rd listen, its weird it just gets me thinking/daydreaming of all sorts of shit lol.

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Been wanting to make something with some Dream Pop influences:

I quite like the intro, love the bass sound. I do think though you should change the kick and snare samples, they just don't sound right imo. I think you should also develop the kick into a more fuller pattern as the track progresses. Overall, it was worth a listen, enjoyed it.

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Originally posted by optik as it's called trance addict!

Found myself skipping through the start of this, not really a fan of psy, acids sound a little dry.. The break sounds okish but for me the track starts when it kicks back in at 3:17. The kick and bass sound really good, driving and makes you want to move. I would scrap the lot and use that and start something else.

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Originally posted by Oakenshield

The sound you bring in at 1.13, its pattern doesn't seem to groove with everything else and when you mix starts to get busy it makes it all sound very off putting and sounds like its clashing with things. More sidechain lol

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Originally posted by Robotrance nothing like that, just increasing paranoia for no spesific reason really. tinfoilhats and all that. its actually really annoying.

Noticed you've deleted this already.. I know you said paranoia, but come on even if you do say something completely retarded, people forget after a day or two nobodies really bothered

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Been wanting to make something with some Dream Pop influences:

I think the mix of this needs help. It sounds a little dead in the mid range. I agree about the kick and snare samples. They sound a bit like you were going for the style of drums Porter Robinson used in Worlds, but they need a a lot of processing before I think they'd fit the style of the track. Or the rest of the track would need to be richer and bolder so that they don't stick out so much. Huge chords. Like the end of Sea of Voices by Porter Robinson.

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Originally posted by optik as it's called trance addict!

This is really well mixed and I like that it feels so driving. It does get a little boring though and could use ear candy.



After spending a totally obnoxious amount of time on this track, I think I've finally nailed it. I've mentioned it before, but I sang the vocals on this one too!

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After spending a totally obnoxious amount of time on this track, I think I've finally nailed it. I've mentioned it before, but I sang the vocals on this one too!

I think this is reaaally good, and one of the most accessible songs for a wider audience I have heard from you. In terms of someone having talent for production, songwriting & vocals all in one, I haven't come across many doing all three as well as this. Best of luck with this one being a breakthrough single.

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Originally posted by Seandroid After spending a totally obnoxious amount of time on this track, I think I've finally nailed it. I've mentioned it before, but I sang the vocals on this one too!

Your best work to date. Well done sean

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Originally posted by Seandroid After spending a totally obnoxious amount of time on this track, I think I've finally nailed it. I've mentioned it before, but I sang the vocals on this one too!

This one has a lot of potential for making some noise lol - but I would like you to work on your drums pattern (a specially in the areas with this morphing bass lines) to add more dynamics and drive.

Just my $0.02

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 This one has a lot of potential for making some noise lol - but I would like you to work on your drums pattern (a specially in the areas with this morphing bass lines) to add more dynamics and drive. Just my $0.02 Darek

Thanks, Idk though. The way the drums are set is kind of canon for the genre. I don't really want to complicate them.

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Originally posted by Seandroid Thanks, Idk though. The way the drums are set is kind of canon for the genre. I don't really want to complicate them.

Think out of the box, do something different and may work for you - just a suggestion

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Originally posted by Seandroid

YES! (only listened op laptopspeakers thus far).
Had it on my old faithful headphones and the only thing I'd like is to have extremer ducking on kick and snare. I feel the singing on the start could be marginally improved. After that it is awesomeness . Very well done.

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Originally posted by Storyteller YES! (only listened op laptopspeakers thus far). Had it on my old faithful headphones and the only thing I'd like is to have extremer ducking on kick and snare. I feel the singing on the start could be marginally improved. After that it is awesomeness . Very well done.

When did you listen? I actually just replaced the file on it not very long ago. The drums are very present now.

I'm actually really happy with my vocal take!! I did many! Haha. I ain't winning any idol competitions, I know.

EDIT: Turns out I hadn't actually uploaded my replacement. Derp. I have now.

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