Thanks Richard and evo8 for the feedback.
I'm really bad in perc patterns, so turning it into a pure tech track is not going to happen. Since my main music is always about positive sounds i'm also having a bad time making dark things, but I will try.
Not a bad start but I would urge you make a much more modern and unique kick as this sounds so standard and kinda woody. Everything else seems mixed well, but again I'd like something more from you, original as opposed to the stock standard roller in there for example.
Sean thanks for feedback on mine, I've almost completely started it from scratch and made it utterly different as it was just boring the way it was. Will post up for yet another humiliation soon, lol!
Mar-03-2014 15:46
PaULiN0
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Registered: Mar 2014
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Re: Sean
quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Not a bad start but I would urge you make a much more modern and unique kick as this sounds so standard and kinda woody. Everything else seems mixed well, but again I'd like something more from you, original as opposed to the stock standard roller in there for example.
Sean thanks for feedback on mine, I've almost completely started it from scratch and made it utterly different as it was just boring the way it was. Will post up for yet another humiliation soon, lol!
Thanks Richard.
Mar-03-2014 21:50
PaULiN0
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Registered: Mar 2014
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added one more min, ready for breakdown and added load of effects.
Mar-04-2014 12:39
Storyteller
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Location: The Netherlands
It sounds quite dated. More important though (imo) is that this thing is still lacking some kind of theme or lead sound to really catch my attention. It's basically all just filler stuff going on.
If less is more think about how much more more would be.
-Frasier
Mar-04-2014 12:42
PaULiN0
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Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
Thanks for your feedback storyteller, yeah i been working on it for so many hours that i haven't took shower or got something to eat. Maybe i should take a break and focus more on a basic theme. My girl hates me making music, she'll do whatever it takes for me to fail.
Mar-04-2014 12:48
Storyteller
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Location: The Netherlands
The girl thing sounds familiar. Mine seems to be winning though , unlike yours.
If less is more think about how much more more would be.
-Frasier
Mar-04-2014 14:30
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
I get scared of my girl trashing my whole studio one day.
Mar-04-2014 15:15
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
Changed notes on my second lead, added a new pad, re did mix down, added 30 more seconds to the original clip. I'd like to challenge clay to a mix down and see who's better.
Mar-04-2014 18:50
TranceElevation
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Ok, I'll be the judge!
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Mar-04-2014 19:26
SherlockCrash
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Registered: Dec 2011
Location: Earth
quote:
Originally posted by PaULiN0
I like the sound of the intro, but it needs to go somewhere. At 2 min I get dissapointed when the short break runs out to nothing. I think you should introduce a arp or something there and get the track going. Me want energy