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TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
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Here we go, my latest EDM style track - any thoughts?



Cheers,

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SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Las Vegas

Darek,
I am going to be overly critical here. For one, I know you can take it (grins)and two because I know your potential.
To be honest this is not a bad track. It has that "I remember" feel to it. With that said, it's solid but damn dood. That is way to way to easy a track for you to be making..lol I EXPECT MORE FROM YOU D!! lol
You have put up WAY more complex arrangements than that. I mean really, how long did that take you? lmao Im razzin you man
On a side note, I cannot even imagine your save lists for song tests.
Probably looks something like..

DCH
DCH Blank Startup File
DCH Blank Startup File AMou
DCH Blank Startup File BMou
DCH Blank Startup File CMou
DCH Blank Startup File DMou
DCH Blank Startup File DMou Style
DCH Blank Startup File DMou Style 1
DCH Blank Startup File DMou Style 2
DCH Blank Startup File DMou Style 2A
DCH Blank Startup File DMou Style 2B

LOL


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gordan100
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Location: Zagreb, Croatia

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here we go, my latest EDM style track - any thoughts?



Cheers,

Darek


I would start on 3:02 and then on 4:45 that vocal should start singing some chorus, because this what you got currently is not enough i think, sounds like a beginning of song, i'm waiting for something to happen but it doesn't. Production is nice


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SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Las Vegas

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
So I'm not all that good any anything other than liquid dnb, so here is me back to this style but a laid-back almost ambient track really.

Have not done any side chain on synths yet.

Does it need some more elements?



Been meaning to hit you back up with this Richard but have been hermitting in the mountains this week. Back now...

Just like Darek, I am going to be critical on this track just for the simple reason your D&B is awesome shit!

This track has a TON of potential man. As you mentioned there is no SC yet present and I tried to imagine it with it,but..not sure that is the Sub tone for this piece. Matter of fact you did a D&B piece not to long ago with this gated glided sub that would be perfect with this.
It was almost a detuned reese that just melted like butter when it came through.

I am simply loving those delay tails,even the reverse delays on the female vox samples. Adds so much atmospheric back end.

Something happens where the energy cuts off at the 1:51 mark

That stab you introduce at the 2:00 mark. Go with that man, I would make it very pronounced as it sounds so dope yet it seems to be hiding in the mix. Even maybe transient into an arp with that tone? just a suggestion.

Yea..dood, this is good stuff.


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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Here we go, my latest EDM style track - any thoughts?



Cheers,

Darek


I read Systems feedback first, but I have to say I really like this a lot, what great sounds and it's so laid back but with plenty of groove for me

VOCALS - Loving the little vocal stabs esp the one at 2.01, but late r the vox get on my nerves, sound a bit awkward and off. Maybe just go with some atmospheric vocal samples here n there?

I'm into this sort of thing lately, as you will hear below. Trying to get some stuff signed to those paid-for music platforms Vloggers use, and your track here is the sort that flows well with videos I think

GUYS thanks for the feedback on Forest Of Dreams, very much appreciated am working away on it

Meantime I have this one here in mind for Vloggers (and my own) videos


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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

So I've changed the bass (& other stuff), is this done or more work to do?

Cheers and upload some shit guys!


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DJRYAN™
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Registered: Aug 2009
Location: Atlanta, USA

GiGi D'Agostino - Bla Bla Bla (Ryan Starr Remix) (WIP)
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SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Las Vegas

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
So I've changed the bass (& other stuff), is this done or more work to do?

Cheers and upload some shit guys!




So good Rich, bass really makes a solid imprint on the mix. Really smooth work bud


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DJRYAN™
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Registered: Aug 2009
Location: Atlanta, USA

quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
So good Rich, bass really makes a solid imprint on the mix. Really smooth work bud


that kick is still stale though.. Imo you have two options. Put a delay on it to give it just a little bounce... or go back in, draw new kick midi, and turn down the volume on the off kicks.. its standing straight up with no bounce...

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SystematicX1
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Ok then..pulling this out of the ashes. Third iteration as a matter of fact. A complete composition change and 2 arrangement changes. It's just getting to the point where I am starting to feel it better with a little more groove. Going to work on another singular note pattern to match the main so it isn't as repetitive. No mix yet as it still early (for an old song..lol)

*another revision has been replaced - added some vox chops and cleaned up the percussion a lil


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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:
Originally posted by DJRYAN™
that kick is still stale though.. Imo you have two options. Put a delay on it to give it just a little bounce... or go back in, draw new kick midi, and turn down the volume on the off kicks.. its standing straight up with no bounce...


I'll get onto this mate, thanks

I don't know what that link is you posted, is that a wip OF yours?


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
Ok then..pulling this out of the ashes. Third iteration as a matter of fact. A complete composition change and 2 arrangement changes. It's just getting to the point where I am starting to feel it better with a little more groove. Going to work on another singular note pattern to match the main so it isn't as repetitive. No mix yet as it still early (for an old song..lol)

*another revision has been replaced - added some vox chops and cleaned up the percussion a lil



I'm not feeling this one buddy, sorry, just not for me & does not seem up to the standard you've been producing, but I do thank you for your kind feedback on mine.


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