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Constantin
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quote:
Originally posted by Oakenshield
been a while i will give feed back tomorrow 2 pence eleccy left..


been trying a lot harder lately so any good?



Sounds like you are to happy with the compressor on the master/kick-bass bus. That pluck could be fitted better in the mix. The transition from 4:40 is... well... there isn't any xD. The idea of the track ain't bad but don't let yourself lured to the dark side of an over compressed mix, for start.


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by Oakenshield
been a while i will give feed back tomorrow 2 pence eleccy left..


been trying a lot harder lately so any good?



Liking this one mate. Interesting melody.


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by evo8
honestly Richard the mix needs a bit of work imo - it has potential tho ill say that. Think you would need a better bassline also



Is this bass and mix better do u think:

Should the bass note change a bar earlier?



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evo8
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Is this bass and mix better do u think:

Should the bass note change a bar earlier?




i think the mix is better now - the bass, i cant really hear it properly, in the mid-range and therefore its not really supporting the track enough?

i think you could do better with the track after the break, as one of my mates used to say "if your gonna have a big long breakdown you better make sure it slams back in with something big"

that big lead sound that plays, i was thinking you could just repeat the first 4 notes every bar, while the bass and your other stuff progresses
i think that would give the track a real focus - you could keep the filter closed in the earlier parts of the track and then open it up slightly as the track progresses??


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by evo8
i think the mix is better now - the bass, i cant really hear it properly, in the mid-range and therefore its not really supporting the track enough?

i think you could do better with the track after the break, as one of my mates used to say "if your gonna have a big long breakdown you better make sure it slams back in with something big"

that big lead sound that plays, i was thinking you could just repeat the first 4 notes every bar, while the bass and your other stuff progresses
i think that would give the track a real focus - you could keep the filter closed in the earlier parts of the track and then open it up slightly as the track progresses??


Great calls.

I've changed the bass and the drop, is this more what you had in mind?
EDIT I just made the riser up to the drop less epic and it seems to really make the drop more impactful.



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evo8
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Great calls.

I've changed the bass and the drop, is this more what you had in mind?
EDIT I just made the riser up to the drop less epic and it seems to really make the drop more impactful.




something along these lines is what i was thinking - its just a basic template i put together last 10 mins



the bassline in your track has no drive, there is nothing propelling the track along
i put in a running bassline but a simple offbeat one could also work

so i would start with the bassline, one you have that sorted you can look at the rest of it


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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Great calls.

I've changed the bass and the drop, is this more what you had in mind?
EDIT I just made the riser up to the drop less epic and it seems to really make the drop more impactful.




I'd have to agree with evo8. The kick and bass are all the way into the background. If they were as solid as the lead sound you would have gotten something quite cool . First of all just put those faders up a bit, then possibly try to accentuate the transients of the kick more so it has more punch. Possibly this could even benefit from a rolling(-ish) bassline.

quote:
Originally posted by evo8
being doing a lot of techno recently but this one is a bit lighter



Although I miss a bit of seperation between instruments and some definition overall, but this is a thing of beauty! I love how spacey it is. Is it finished yet? If you wouldn't mind sharing the track and stemd I'd like to try and give it a spin + try to do a remix on it. I feel inspired because of it haha.


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by evo8
something along these lines is what i was thinking - its just a basic template i put together last 10 mins



the bassline in your track has no drive, there is nothing propelling the track along
i put in a running bassline but a simple offbeat one could also work

so i would start with the bassline, one you have that sorted you can look at the rest of it


Thx!

Oddly enough I had a powerful Michael Woods rolling tech bass in there just before I took it out and replaced it with what you hear now.
I just felt the rolling bass thing seemed old fashioned.

Anyway I agree bass is not powerful enough so will be working on that before going any further.

And thanks Storyteller for your input.
I should have mentioned this latest version was just thrown together at the last moment and I had not at all looked at mix / kick volume etc yet, but even so your comments are a useful pointer.


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evo8
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quote:
Originally posted by Storyteller
I'd have to agree with evo8. The kick and bass are all the way into the background. If they were as solid as the lead sound you would have gotten something quite cool . First of all just put those faders up a bit, then possibly try to accentuate the transients of the kick more so it has more punch. Possibly this could even benefit from a rolling(-ish) bassline.



Although I miss a bit of seperation between instruments and some definition overall, but this is a thing of beauty! I love how spacey it is. Is it finished yet? If you wouldn't mind sharing the track and stemd I'd like to try and give it a spin + try to do a remix on it. I feel inspired because of it haha.


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TranceLover007
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Here we go guys just a demo for now but_still thinking about adding some smooth and catchy female vocal to it but you can hear the concept already



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MSZ
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Lol are you in cahoots with someone running a bot ring or something? Look at the people that are commenting, the continuity of the usernames and activity, all following like 1-4 people.


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Lol are you in cahoots with someone running a bot ring or something? Look at the people that are commenting, the continuity of the usernames and activity, all following like 1-4 people.


This is interesting point you made as I'm trying to understand this mechanism behind lol - I initially just send this to few places (like EDM.com, ....) and day/s after this things start to happening lol - I think if they like your style they will promo your track on social media all over the net lol, even right now I have like 300 plays per hr lol - can't complain

Also, some of those people just joining SoundCloud to create like playlist so they can listen to their prefer music for free - looks like it is a deal for them lol

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