|Originally posted by gordan100 |
Glad you like it Thanks!
Structure definitely needs more work.
I'm still not sure about part that starts at 1:15, sometimes i have a feeling that some tones of that melody are displaced, and that it clash with piano starting at 1:50. Then again, sometimes i have a feeling that piano is displaced
Edit... did some changes after this post, i think it's better now
best ive heard from you in a while Gordan, sounds like old prog stuff, not forced, that gated synth sound really makes it, great job! ill have a proper listen tonight to nitpick