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TranceElevation
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Anyone Like iT?? i Hate it!


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TranceLover007
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quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
I think i'm done with this.

Is it any good?



Yeah, sound good as an idea for something that suppose to happen along the way in this track (about 2min mark for me) - like this bass become secondary sound replace by some lead playing different melodic part - also kick could be a bit punchier (at least for me) -> so yeah, good idea so far which need to be develop farther.

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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Cam someone give me their ears on this, the football club track I'm doing.
I seem to have too much bass, do you agree?

I should re-do the crowd chant, it sounds nasty.



Richard - sounds design and melodic line is really sweet man, I like overall idea but structure in this short WIP is not clicking with me so far (like this 0:30 min mark where I expected something different to take place) - but I also understand that this is just an idea and can evolve to quite a massive production in the future my friend.

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Still going to wait for more comments on this before will offer my perspective but I believe that this is still recoverable concept lol

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gordan100
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Cam someone give me their ears on this, the football club track I'm doing.
I seem to have too much bass, do you agree?

I should re-do the crowd chant, it sounds nasty.



It's fine, there's not too much bass for me. Sounds great. Except crowd.

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gordan100
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quote:
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Anyone Like iT?? i Hate it!



Bass and strings are ok (1:00 - 1:55). Lead is kinda tiring to me.

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Mr.Mystery
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quote:
Originally posted by TranceElevation
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Sounds like a loop on top of which someone is mashing the keyboards.


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Registered: Sep 2009
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OK, just before I add some final touches and send it out -> my collab with Carlos and Amy:



Any thoughts???

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Richard Butler
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Darek as you know I have really admired some of your works lately but sorry man this does not a lot for me all round. It's just ok melodically.

This mix is not to your usual standard, the vocals are hard to decipher, way too much bid / bass in them and they clash with the synths even though the vocals are very loud. The kick is old fashioned and wooly, the early intro synth part is clumsy, damn this is nasty feeback, sorry Darek.

Sorry Man, I cant love them all, and I know this can make one feel a bit down but I wont compromise on honest feedback.


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Mr.Mystery
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I'm going to have to agree - the mixdown is just completely off. The beat is almost inaudible and mushy, while the vocals are so loud they drown everything else out.


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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Darek as you know I have really admired some of your works lately but sorry man this does not a lot for me all round. It's just ok melodically.

This mix is not to your usual standard, the vocals are hard to decipher, way too much bid / bass in them and they clash with the synths even though the vocals are very loud. The kick is old fashioned and wooly, the early intro synth part is clumsy, damn this is nasty feeback, sorry Darek.

Sorry Man, I cant love them all, and I know this can make one feel a bit down but I wont compromise on honest feedback.


Sounds good Richard - this is not the latest one version and most of the vocal stuff is already cleanup - as far as this pluck in the beginning (a think this is the one you are referring to as clumsy) the feedback is also already properly adjusted -> and yes agree with you on the fact that is it hard to make everybody happy a specially in the style that most people over here (on Tranceaddict) doesn't admire anyway lol.

Cheers brother for your honest opinion



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I'm going to have to agree - the mixdown is just completely off. The beat is almost inaudible and mushy, while the vocals are so loud they drown everything else out.


It is not easy to get you comment on any work/production and usually when you do then you deliver the "BOMB" -> you mention that this is almost inaudible and mushy with additional problems with the vocal? (and yes vocal level and sound eq is already adjusted as I mention in my response to Richard comment), also which reference system did you use to identified this mixing problems as this would help me address some specific issues you heard in the mix.

Cheers and appreciate your time man.

Darek


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quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
It is not easy to get you comment on any work/production and usually when you do then you deliver the "BOMB" -> you mention that this is almost inaudible and mushy with additional problems with the vocal? (and yes vocal level and sound eq is already adjusted as I mention in my response to Richard comment), also which reference system did you use to identified this mixing problems as this would help me address some specific issues you heard in the mix.

Cheers and appreciate your time man.

Darek

I think the issue with the kick is that it sort of blends with the bass because there's no punch to it. The track would benefit from a more snappy kick. I was listening to the track on my home stereo with a subwoofer which emphasized the problem even further.

I don't usually like to give feedback on tracks, since I believe every artist makes their music the way they intend it to sound. I commented here, because I believe this doesn't sound the way you want it to.


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