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MSZ
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Registered: Jun 2005
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maybe this is too noisy

Old Post Jun-19-2018 02:47  Canada
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SystematicX1
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Oh and another vocal track for your deliberation, any crits welcome and very much needed lol

More chilled than the track above I posted

https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/midnight-son1


Richard,

IMHO on this particular track, the Vox cut does not work, unlike some of your others. And personally, I do not think it is needed any way.
On the other side, I really really like this and as it seems we all are taking a retro feel in our music as of late, it is very appropriate and catchy. I really like the movement in your composition and really great arrangement tones.
I for sure want to see this fully developed and possibly a new favorite from you.
If there was anything that I could critique well there was one area.
Curious. Is this track in mono? It seems narrow in the mix.


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gordan100
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quote:
Originally posted by MSZ


maybe this is too noisy


It is a bit imo, but has nice chords and progression, it's worth to play more with this


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gordan100
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@Richard - was listening both of your tracks few days ago, didn't comment anything cause tbh didn't really like neither. I've heard crazy nice and creative tracks from you but these are not among them imo


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Any good?


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Location: Seattle, USA

What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness

Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.

Darek

Here is my another chillout WIP


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gordan100
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Thanks Darek, it wasn't intentional jazzy, it just happened that way

This wip of yours is nice and sounds good, but tbh nothing memorable imho, i liked some of your prev chill tracks more than this one.


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MSZ
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Registered: Jun 2005
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quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness

Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.

Darek

Here is my another chillout WIP



theres something about that slap bass that is not sitting well for me, think something to do with the pitch(maybe tuned too flat?), but nice work.



i've been wrestling this wip for a while, not making much progress maybe slowly inching forward. the mix is off, not sure how im going to sequence it or keep it.

Old Post Jun-27-2018 12:16  Canada
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quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
theres something about that slap bass that is not sitting well for me, think something to do with the pitch(maybe tuned too flat?), but nice work.



i've been wrestling this wip for a while, not making much progress maybe slowly inching forward. the mix is off, not sure how im going to sequence it or keep it.


Thanks Mac for taking your time and listen to my WIP - as far as this "slap" bass line statement, I will have to check it out because there is two of those basses working together (one is flat one) and the balance may be shifted a bit out of proportion, thanks

Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?

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..... but tbh nothing memorable imho.......


Appreciate your comment man - any suggestion what memorable element/s would you like to hear in this WIP?

Cheers,

Darek


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gordan100
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Appreciate your comment man - any suggestion what memorable element/s would you like to hear in this WIP?

Cheers,

Darek


I don't know Darek, it sounds nice and everything but it's like i already heard dozens of tracks like that

Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)


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MSZ
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Registered: Jun 2005
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quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?


whats freq shifting? dont think I have anything that does that except maybe the vocoder. its probably pretty wide, I dont mono stuff.

Old Post Jul-01-2018 16:07  Canada
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