Originally posted by Rodri Santos
Does not sound outstanding yet but certainly does not sound bad, vocals seem a bit out of key at points but i think vocals will sit well, i see a good potential i like this kind of "yacht house " tunes show me the final version and i will tell you if something needs more work so far... great potential.
Sweet man, appreciate -> and yes this whole vocal will be soon rerecorded so hopefully we will remove all of those out of key moments
All the best Rodri
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
OK guys - just to resurrect this thread a bit I decided to share with you my latest vocal track - still in very early WIP stage but you could definitely hear and feel the direction I'm taking this track through.
At the moment is very dry yet as vocal need to be re-recorded (for now it is only a space reservation to complete structural arrangement).
She found me on SoundCloud and offer an collab on my track preview - so good things will happen with your dedication and persistence
So give it a run (it is a private track so you would not find it on SoundCloud):
DCH New Concept MAY 05 2013 Vocal Ableton 9 by DariusX.
Cheers TA's
Darek
Sounds like a nice start, good luck finishing it.
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May-10-2013 22:38
Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
Darius - really like her vocals, especially in the drop - I wouldn't re - record that part mate, they are perfectly sung.
Great track - your best ever.
May-11-2013 22:49
Juan Paulino
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Registered: Mar 2012
Location: Rouge City
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Originally posted by evo8
an attempt at a more funkier sound........
p.s. how good is Valhalla Vintage Verb, covers so much ground, for 50 dollars is just ridiculous
Very Very good, the beginning sounds like PVD. I'm not too sure set on the kick drum tho it can use more definition on the highs by layering perhaps? The rest sounds awesome.
I have been working on this for too long, maybe 3 hours already and in this time i should have made a lot more, it's simply that i'm not feeing this at all. Do you think i should stop working on this and start with something else??
This is uncarefully slammed, last minute is what the main chorus should look like. Rest is just to see the other elements more clearly.
Thx!
May-13-2013 13:09
Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
Rodri that one sounds like 1994 Super Mario tune. I say move on from this one. Sorry mate.
May-13-2013 15:19
Rodri Santos
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Milan
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Originally posted by Richard Butler
Rodri that one sounds like 1994 Super Mario tune. I say move on from this one. Sorry mate.
Yes exactly my thoughts, it sounds too happy/cheesy
May-13-2013 16:16
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
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Originally posted by evo8
normally wouldnt listen to stuff like this but i kinda like it! Has that deadmau5 feel
But i think its a bit heavy in the low-mids in places - if you listen to the radio mix of I Remember you can hear it has more space down there and lets the vocal be more dominant in that range
and yeah, some of the vox are a bit off in places! but overall nice tune! some more work maybe to make it more pleasant on the ears overall and i would listen to it more
one more thing just at 3:45 if you automate the bass eq leading up to that drop i think the drop will be much nicer - at the moment im not really sure is the track really in at 3:16???
Thanks Paul for your comment, appreciate - right now this production is in re-recording stage and some of your findings will/should be taken care.
As far as my bass line - yah, it's in final adjusted stage lol - nice to hear from you man
Darek
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I like that freedom with no boundaries, no restrictions, no rules setup by somebody else – it's only me and my music.
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
OK guys - just to resurrect this thread a bit I decided to share with you my latest vocal track - still in very early WIP stage but you could definitely hear and feel the direction I'm taking this track through.
At the moment is very dry yet as vocal need to be re-recorded (for now it is only a space reservation to complete structural arrangement).
She found me on SoundCloud and offer an collab on my track preview - so good things will happen with your dedication and persistence
So give it a run (it is a private track so you would not find it on SoundCloud):
DCH New Concept MAY 05 2013 Vocal Ableton 9 by DariusX.
Cheers TA's
Darek
Really cool, like it a lot on he whole. But ill try and make constructive criticisms as imo thats a lot more useful than patting on the back!
For me the vocal @ .50 is just too quirky and strange sounding, really don't like that part personally.
Really like the hook at 1.50 sounds really cool synth wise and vocals
For me the bass @ 3.00 isnt working properly, think its having a conflict with same lows coming from pads or other synths i would again look at increasing the high pass on these parts to avoid muddiness or get id of them?
Perhaps try some light saturation on synths for a bit of grit?
i think its got loads of potential but if you a/b with some similar commercial tracks it could be awesome!
When you rerecord vocals maybe double track for added thickness??
My tracks coming along but been a bit ill/down the last week or 2 so haven't done much work!