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optik
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Registered: Jun 2004
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
A new deep house track. What do you think so far?
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like the feel in the buildup

needs more bass when it comes in at 49 seconds - there is very little sub there

like the house organ at 2.00

don't like the basslines when it comes back at 2:30 - this bit needs to deliver after the little build

percs and little vox samples are spot on

I'd make more of the female vocal

could be a good track if you fix the bass

hope this helps

T


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Richard Butler
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Optik, great call, is this bass now killin it or not?



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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Optik, great call, is this bass now killin it or not?




this is more funky house, not deep but regardless i like this track, few odd notes here and there that dont seem to fit, the little sound that hits on the offbeat before each bar ends is throwing the whole thing off for me, sorry if that doesnt make sense

im listening on my ue boom and the kick/bass is working well and is nice and punchy, other drums good too


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deegee
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Optik, great call, is this bass now killin it or not?




This reminds me very strongly of a funkier version of PPK - Hey DJ!

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optik
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Optik, great call, is this bass now killin it or not?




much better- but listen to this:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZjZ-OmjB4tQ

as a reference - there is another layer of bass that is missing in yours. It's hard to get right but crucial for this genre


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optik
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it's not trance - what do you think?

needs a bit of work in the last 3 minutes

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MSZ
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Those are some nice pads man, spectrasonics? I have no crits, sounds good.

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Probably going to bin this, slow anticlimactic and loopy(wait thats like all my tracks), any thoughts before so?

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deegee
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Probably going to bin this, slow anticlimactic and loopy(wait thats like all my tracks), any thoughts before so?


Yeah. DO NOT bin this. The beat is sexy, the mood is dark and brooding, and the breakdown is creepy and full of tension in very good ways. You just need to write your way out of the breakdown and you're good to go--maybe using those same vocal samples as a big hook on top of all the other stuff.

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Maybe mutate that high plucky arp into something dirtier through a build and use that as your lead line after the drop.

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Richard Butler
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Probably going to bin this, slow anticlimactic and loopy(wait thats like all my tracks), any thoughts before so?


The track is not really one I'd listen to, but none the less I commend the brooding atmosphere and mix. Nothing wrong with it per see, it's just not dancey enough for my own tastes.


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Storyteller
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Probably going to bin this, slow anticlimactic and loopy(wait thats like all my tracks), any thoughts before so?


The vibe on this is pretty intense. Would like to see a deeper kick and possible some sidechained ducking on the bass and possibly lower the bassline volume a tiny bit. The atmosphere is really really good. If you can get the beat rolling a bit more you're gold imo.


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