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Renegade
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Registered: May 2001
Location: Prague, Czech Republic
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Put yourself in the girl's shoes. I know that if I got that letter from a girl (or - if they go that way - a guy) I would probably think that he/she was pretty wierd rather than the sort of person I'd be interested in "dating".
There's too much information there. It sounds like he's fawning - like he's babbling incoherently because he's too nervous to put anything down concisely. Also, he seems to be aiming at the "pity" angle a bit too much with all that self-depreciation (whether it's tongue-in-cheek or not). Not a good idea.
Tell him to write something that's to the point and vague enough to be mysterious. Something along the lines of:
Dear X,
I'm Y, you may know me from class Z. I'm just writing this note to ask you if you would like to go out with me on Friday, because I'm too shy to ask you in person. It's no big deal if you don't want to, but I thought it'd be great to catch up after school's finished. My number is blah and my e-mail is blah.
xoxo
Y
There. Nice and casual, too the point, and it leaves the girl wondering what sort of person you really are (mystery is good at the first stage of dating). The letter he wrote makes him sound desperate and a tad peculiar. No offense to your friend, of course, I'm sure he's a nice guy, but I just can't see his love letter "wooing" anyone.
Having said all that, is it worth pointing out that he has a better chance of success if he - y'know - asks her face to face? I mean, he's going to have to speak to her on the date, so what's the big deal about speaking to her a few days beforehand?
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Jun-11-2003 06:51
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Rostros
Carbon Sasquatch
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: United Kingdom
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This is a Joke right ? That letter sucks ass , if i was a girl id prob laugh my arse off for about 5 years then die of laughter , i hope she a comical side coz id love to see her face when she reads that, id steal a poem off the net a real touchy one and leave your cell number at the bottom , with a few kisses and a name, more on the current letter, you say that your not good looking and that you dont have a big dick a girl does not want to hear that unless she is marilyn chambers, u mention words like shit these arn't shakespears words are they, u mention a beach , thats quite good as a beach is quite sexual but you mention Mcdonalds the root of all evil of take aways also too commercial , u say your sooooooooo lonely , jesus u have to think that u may be a looser and have no friends why else would u be lonely. just go and talk to her ffs, fucking amatures
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through were pre-chewed and tasteless. We've been dominated by sadists, or ignored by the apathetic. The few that had something to teach found us will-
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Jun-11-2003 09:07
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DaveSZ
When The Levee Breaks
Registered: Jan 2003
Location: ATX
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Jun-11-2003 11:24
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