|Originally posted by Richard Butler |
Here's one I will probably send out, what would you change?
Is the bass taking up too much room? Drop 1 a bit lack lustre?
For starter, the glitching seems off, sounds too mechanical. I would look at that.
And at the start, you have som nasty click going on at the off beat percussion. Other then that the beat is nice.
Im not sure about the sound coming in at 1:23, it doesnt really fit in my opinion. For me, something else would take it's place, maybe a dark vocal sample? I like the drop however.
The second break is good, but again, the same sound as in the first break annoys me. Right at the transition into the break it sounds cool though.
And again, at the end of the track, the glitching, not very tight.
I like the bass, but I think that there are others here that can give you a more reliable opinion about wether it's too big or not.
It got potential if you get it right.