Like the drums, percussions, sound, very powerful. Yeah, that change of style at 2:10 sounds a bit weird to me too.
Love the build starting at 1:20-2:10, and then i was expecting that you will continue with this and add drums, but you have completely change style in that point, and everything droped down to me. But then again a great break at 3:00, and 3:30 down again .. But i think this could turn out really good if you base this at these break parts.
Evo, or Paul as i found out recently, i agree with Richard about the not so pretty sound he mentioned.
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