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Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa

Yeah, the lead is still too loud. And there's this thing that starts around 1:30 that sound really weird and off, but I don't know if that's a synth or just a reverb/delay of it.

I would also seek a deeper, rounder kick for this. The current one sounds a bit too nineties eurodance-y for my tastes.


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Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
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I think I posted a clip of this earlier, but I'm not going to work on it any more, so here - a free track:


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evo8
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quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
Thanks for comments guys. No, Systematic, kick wasn't mono or at least i didn't switch to mono by purpose . Yeah it's pretty messy mix, thanks for you ears guys. I've lower main lead volume, but maybe needed more.

Some "bassline" if now after 2:00 but don't know if that took me too melodic :/



yeah i dunno its not really working mate


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quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
I think I posted a clip of this earlier, but I'm not going to work on it any more, so here - a free track:



not bad i woulda changed some things but its done, i got a little Stylus Trouble vibe off it in places


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Mr.Mystery
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quote:
Originally posted by evo8
not bad i woulda changed some things but its done, i got a little Stylus Trouble vibe off it in places

Yeah, it's just that it's so far from what I do nowadays that there's not much point in developing it further.


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chris marsh
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Originally posted by SystematicX1
Thanks Chris for the valuable insight!
With that said I decided to experiment with a new kick and snare tone and checked on the bass. Damn if my cans aren't giving away to the dead.
I haven't done the ultimate test in the truck yet but think this did a little more improvement.
Appreciate the advice.




your welcome dude glad to be of service I lked the new drums, thought it was a definite improvement didnt get a chance to comment further as its been taken down. could have maybe even but a proper breaks beat behind it as suggested by someone else on here

what cans do you use? if they are not giving you an accurate picture of whats going on maybe get some new ones? AKGk701 so cheap nowadays...im having to rely on my cans as acoustics in new room awful atm!


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chris marsh
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Registered: Feb 2012
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quote:
Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
I think I posted a clip of this earlier, but I'm not going to work on it any more, so here - a free track:



quality IMO. if anything maybe missing some kind of "hook" but then that would change the feel. Perhaps the tune could have used a little development after the drop. I like it a lot. nice mix, textures, layers. sounds tight. skills


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Richard Butler
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Im really liking the arpeggio at the end of the clip. If im completely honest the rest of it is not working for me, especially the vocal. Drums and bass sounding tight though. I would scrap the rest of the music in this track, and use that end section and build a track around that and the drums/bass. That end bit is really awesome IMO. All IMO as always....



Thanks Chris

I'm pretty down on my musak at the mo, nothing seeming to grab people much.

I don't know if I will finish this one tbh as I cant see where it can go after the break to make it interesting

Cheers much for the feed


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Richard Butler
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yeah i dunno its not really working mate



This may seem weird FB but the first 15 secs are wondefull, if you could keep it like that with a light deft touch and then add some vocals to float things away, nice. It becomes too heavy handed and jerky after 15 secs for me


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Richard Butler
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Here's a WIP, is it going somewhere ?


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SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Las Vegas

quote:
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Here's a WIP, is it going somewhere ?



imo your sub is taking over the track, there behind the mid muddiness is some really nice higher frequency tones.
I think those tones need to be highlighted and showcased and Im willing to bet you'll get a much different feel.


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Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's a WIP, is it going somewhere ?
I do like the idea of this one, just needs some filling up.

I could do without the vocal, though, but that might just be me.


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