|Originally posted by Evolve140 |
Sorry fellas, uploaded updated version...
IMO there are some good ideas in there, but it doesnt really feel like a cohesive track in some ways. around 3 mins it starts to sound a bit confused/loose to me, almost like 2 tracks mixing into one.
i lke the piano chords at the beginning but they do soun very mechanical, as opposed to natural, like they are being played, perhaps what you were going for
mix wise i feel like it could benefit from being cleaned up quite a bit, especially the resonant "stabby" synth the drums are a bit lacking in high end, and the mix could be wider in parts too. Stlye wise its not really my cup of tea. Would defo be a good idea to A/B similar tracks if you are not already doing that..
sorry that's not very positive. obviously its only my opinion but i think its worth giving your honest opinion if you are going to do this...