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gordan100
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'm working on this one, any thoughts so far?
The image is of a stream and waterfall I recently built that was bare dirt, so there..lol

Got add something to that first break



It's a really cool groove and i love sound selection


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gordan100
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Does that voice and singing sound stupid over this track?


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SystematicX1
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quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
Does that voice and singing sound stupid over this track?



No, it actually fitting. With that said, it needs a few elements imho.
One, It needs to be pronounced. It needs to be the dominate focal point of the track.Push it up in the mix Two, I would suggest a cleanup on the vox. Take the dry bed and give it some high end and give it some clarity. 3rd, Add some delay and verb. With the gap between verses it gives you a chance to make some juicy vox delay tails that would fit nicely in transitions.
ala..
https://youtu.be/P2IGgGLjPkg
Sounds cool man


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gordan100
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Thanks for that example and advices, Phil. I have tried to add more highend and clarity on voice but it started to pierce my ears, so i've pulled it back. I'll give it another go. Also, vocal was recorded on some really cheap mic, low on volume, so i needed to give him a boost with amplifier but then a nasty lowend buzz came in. I should probably record vocals again on a better mic


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Mel David
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🦉 Hey Gordan, try this. Before the kick drops or main section like a chorus, insert a 1-bar fill section. I find it makes tracks less predictable & turns a 32-bar section to a 33-bar section, which is a Freemasonic number.

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Richard Butler
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Originally posted by gordan100
Does that voice and singing sound stupid over this track?



I like this mate, reminds me of SOft Cell from the early 80's. A bit of rumble mid low end needs removing. I enjoy the way the vocal gets more intense over time. In the early part though just clean up the pitches and get it nice n contained with a bit of limiting.


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Richard Butler
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So I'm not all that good any anything other than liquid dnb, so here is me back to this style but a laid-back almost ambient track really.

Have not done any side chain on synths yet.

Does it need some more elements?


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gordan100
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It's a nice melody and groove, i don't think you need more elements

i would though cut from 1:16 - 2:28, i think that track develops too slowly

Those plucks starts at 2:52 are nice. You could maybe make a full break with them and bassline at 3:16 and then introduce piano and drums again and do some small variations on plucks. Just my thoughts

btw. you are very good in many genres


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
It's a nice melody and groove, i don't think you need more elements

i would though cut from 1:16 - 2:28, i think that track develops too slowly

Those plucks starts at 2:52 are nice. You could maybe make a full break with them and bassline at 3:16 and then introduce piano and drums again and do some small variations on plucks. Just my thoughts

btw. you are very good in many genres


Thanks for your thoughts mate, am having a play around

BTW when I said remove some mid-low rumble on your track, I mean't from the vocal FFI


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Hides in Shadow
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quote:
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So I'm not all that good any anything other than liquid dnb, so here is me back to this style but a laid-back almost ambient track really.

Have not done any side chain on synths yet.

Does it need some more elements?



I'm not an expert on dnb but this sounds really good. Might be the best I ever heard from you, maybe cuz its ambient.


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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
So I'm not all that good any anything other than liquid dnb, so here is me back to this style but a laid-back almost ambient track really.

Have not done any side chain on synths yet.

Does it need some more elements?



This is actually really good Richard, very promising WIP man.

Just from my observation - kick is not giving 100% justice to this production, my $0.02


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quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
Does that voice and singing sound stupid over this track?



It may take some tweaking and adjusting but this WIP has some potential - I do agree with Phil comment about your vocal which need to have some more development/buildup on it (I usually have between 5~10 channels with vocal and vocal FX) - also drums would need to be more alive (spread some parts around like one channel of hi-hats pinging between l and R) for cool effect. It is all about listeners experience and how he/she will perceive your production - hopefully this make any sense

Soon I will upload my latest EDM track (WIP) to let you hear some vocal FX.

Cheers,

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