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Innocence Lost
Uptight Biatch,..
Registered: Jan 2014
Location: THANK THE LORD *for* being born yelluh.
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Dec-02-2014 19:43
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BshidoHEAT
don't be that guy!!!
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Ninjas never tell....
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Dec-05-2014 23:10
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Domesty
tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2011
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quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Vocals take is in, let me know how I have fukked the mixing would ya?
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As you said that you like to turn those clikety-clak HI freqs, i cant help but feel that the mid area is still kinda odd. I mean like its squished and has mud. What do you have on your master buffer?
The vocals are nice, but they seem to be at the same range as some elements like the piano, like 0:44. Few touches to them should fix it.
Your beats and perc work is still solid!
quote: | Originally posted by BshidoHEAT
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The clap isn't working at all. Also at 4:20 so on, the vocals can barely be heared when the tube-like lead plays. Kicks envelope also is kinda lost as it feels really weak.
Sructure is okay for the most part.
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Dec-06-2014 02:59
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deegee
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2014
Location: Toronto, Canada
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quote: | Originally posted by Richard Butler
Vocals take is in, let me know how I have fukked the mixing would ya?
Edit; a few adjustments since Domestys input.
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I can't really comment on the track because it's not in a style I really enjoy so I don't think I could be useful. Production seems tight though--and I looooooooove the vocal. Overprocessed for my taste but I like it a lot.
quote: | Originally posted by BshidoHEAT
After a long time out of the game, I'm trying to take it up again. This is a remix of Cryophonik's old track from way back. |
- the clap or snare is distorted in a way that just doesn't work with the rest of the track. try softening it out a bit--it punches too much through the mix for me. After the breakdown it's much better.
- I like that pad/synth sound that shows up around 0:50. Sounds very smooth, for lack of a better term. Probably something I'd fix on if I were hearing it on a dancefloor.
- the off-8 blip at the beginning is just distracting, doesn't feel like it's sitting in the mix
- the vocals also don't feel like they're sitting in the mix--too front and centre. It's a little bit better when the vocal first enters during the breakdown
- I like the breakbeat in the breakdown, though there's some weird stuttering? I'd turn the whole phrase with the kick-snare-kick-snare into a breakbeat
Other than that this feels like it's got some great pieces, but it doesn't feel like it goes much of anywhere. There's no real energy buildup or release, not even just sort of a relentless/driving/hypnotic feel to fit in a set somewhere. I'd like to feel more of a splash when the vocals kick in, you know? Don't get me wrong, I don't think this is terrible; as said above the basic structure is there, just needs some shaping.
Anyone care to have a go at this WIP? I'm mainly at the stage where I'm endlessly fussing with tiny things so I can avoid doing a final mixdown. I'm aware some of the EQ needs work--waiting for some time with a friend's good monitors. Thoughts, anyone? Don't hold back.
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Dec-08-2014 06:30
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Storyteller
Supreme tracneaddict
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: The Netherlands
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Dec-08-2014 13:18
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