I like the second version better, it seems more suited.
I would say for the first version that the distorted bass that you used was pretty funky. Pop that up with a different kick and progression/tempo and you could really hit a nice groovy tone
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Aug-28-2019 01:36
Mel David
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Location: Sydney
🧜🏼♀️ So won't you slide away back to the ocean. I'll go back to the city lights.
🤠 Obviously not my photos or music, but I think I've cleverly visualised Miley's new song. I don't know how to embed Twitter media here. YouTube won't let me share this one. The audio gets blocked.
I am so up and down on this track. Almost ditched it and am trying to work it out and it "seems" like there is an improvement. Undecided if I want to keep that kick
Phil, I would still work on it as I believe this track has lots of potentials but you over doing your high-end and this is why your whole energy (dynamics) is not there anymore - try to find the right balance in freq before you will move on to the other part of your track.
Darek
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It has been some time for me to post anything over here but I'm still producing and having fun with it lol - my latest WIP (some part of the track) which I'm currently working on (one of few lol). This production is more on Electro-EDM side:
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Sep-03-2019 18:42
TranceLover007
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Location: Seattle, USA
Couples of Nu-Funk/Disco ideas in work also lol - I know that this should be more on Trance side but at the moment I have few concepts from different styles lol
Bothe of those ideas require some more development and tweaking with EQ lol - have fun guys.
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Darek
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
It has been some time for me to post anything over here but I'm still producing and having fun with it lol - my latest WIP (some part of the track) which I'm currently working on (one of few lol). This production is more on Electro-EDM side:
Cheers,
Darek
Uh...yea! seriously, yea! This had my head movin right from the get go.
Still got it D! ::nudge nudge::
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Sep-04-2019 02:35
TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
Uh...yea! seriously, yea! This had my head movin right from the get go.
Still got it D! ::nudge nudge::
Thanks Phil, it is funny how some time everything just turn right man lol - at the beginning I never know what kind of track I will come up with but usually my first step is to get some basic drums loops going on and then work on melodic chords progression with slowly adjusting BPM till everything sounds just right for me - it is some goofy way (for some) but I like to work that way man, also right from start I'm paying extra attention to balance and dynamics.
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Darek
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Originally posted by gordan100
It's a cover of Felix track i guess
So, it seems to my ears that there is a big stereo separation issue.
Almost like everything is panned odd.
Dig the concept, very airy and atmospheric. The vocal shot seems like it has a bit to much delay or verb on it. I'd actually suggest going mono on that as it seems to conflict with the already stereo'd out harmonics.
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Working this little chill d&b track in about 20 minutes. Haven't done much but think it has some potential.
Needs some mids for sure and will probably throw in a hook somewhere