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Oakenshield
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Registered: Oct 2012
Location: Blackpool
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im more using it to learn transitions better its just thrown togeather i keep makin stuff get half way and then i dont like it and start again lol
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Sep-07-2014 18:12
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Domesty
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Registered: Oct 2011
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quote: | Originally posted by Oakenshield
trying to get better at arrangement and transitions.... |
As Evolve said, the kick/bass combo doesnt stand out from each other that well. Kick sounds really weak against that kind of sub bass which just pounds and isnt well binded. At the end, where you just rose the octave on your bass sounds pretty weird. The pads could be also tighter and the high frequencies are little out of place.
Composition vise it does better.
Your other track sounds really clean. I kinda like it. Sounds lil bit empty and relays much on the lead.
Any problems with mix? I think I have pretty cool lead synth idea for this track.
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Sep-07-2014 18:41
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PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
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Sep-08-2014 12:09
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PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..
Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space
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quote: | Originally posted by Lucidity
Sounds like the click on the kick, is a little too high in frequency or too loud, imo it shouldn't be louder than the hi hats, it sounds like it is clashing with them a little, to my ears, but I am listening on cans (K701's). I really like the direction of the track so far, I am very interested to hear this finished, keep up the good work, it has a nice vibe. |
Thanks Lucid, I tried using Bineaural Panning on the kick to create a better groove but I'm still new to the process. I think i should of just left it alone. However the pads I surrounded around the kick which to me was the aim i was going for, cheers. I will try and finish this one.
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Sep-08-2014 21:24
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Oakenshield
tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2012
Location: Blackpool
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quote: | Originally posted by PaULiN0
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i like that the perc seems dead maybe add in a deep tribel type thud to go on the loop
like
K--nock nock kick
it should thicken up the loop as it sounds great with that type of sound i think!
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Sep-08-2014 23:48
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Storyteller
Supreme tracneaddict
Registered: Feb 2005
Location: The Netherlands
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Sep-09-2014 07:36
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