|Originally posted by cryophonik |
I like that Seandroid, particularly once it kicks in at 0:59. The breakdown before that feels a little detached from the rest of the music to me, but it's obviously early in the process, so I'll be interested to see where you take it.
Anyway, here's the alternate version of my song with a few more synths and a somewhat better mix (IMO). I still need to work on the vocals a bit (EQ, de-ess, some pitchiness here and there, etc.). Listening at work and the bass sounds sorta mushy to me.
the vocal sits nicely - its well upfront, some slight sibilance but that should be easily fixed.
I think the accompanying music could be better, im not really liking the flow of it, i dont think it is doing justice to the vocal :-/