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madmuso
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Melbourne
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quote: | Originally posted by Seandroid
I like the saw lead when it's getting filtered in but I really don't know how I feel about it once it's totally open. I think the entrance into the break needs to be more fluid too, the lead sorta just stops after being filtered out and doesn't melt into it.
The build after the break is my favourite part but it's a little long, and I imagine it's going to be followed by another drop when you're done, making the track pretty lengthy.
The vocals have some timing things you could probably fix easily. I really like the build up quite a bit, and the entrance into the drop, but the actual drop itself seems totally alien to it. That snare stutter into it makes it sound like it's going to be a lot more driving and high energy than it winds up being IMO.
This is actually an older track by me that I decided to revisit to get it to be release quality. I re-recorded the verse and shortened the track by like 3 minutes. Worked out pretty well. Still have some work to do on the vocals I think but yeah! |
Great song, is that you singing? Singers tone really suits the song.
I listened a few times and the only thing I wanted to hear with more oomph at some stage was the "its in my heart" hook section. I kept hearing it at some stage with everything dropeed out and just the vocals with a big ass stereo synth playing sustained chords, and maybe a string section with it. awesome work!
Dumb question, what genre would this song fall under?
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Feb-14-2015 07:40
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madmuso
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Melbourne
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Hey guys,
I staretd to make some changes today, any feedback again is appreciated. Im thinking, maybe I should ditch the intro and somehow have a new intro mroe related to the 16th bass line that comes in. i dunno. Thanks again,
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Feb-14-2015 07:43
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madmuso
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2009
Location: Melbourne
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quote: | Originally posted by scorpradio
Well, this is my first listen and I say I do like the production of the song. I also like your arrangement of tones.
The issue I am having is that it almost feels like it is two different songs melded to mix only because of the bpm.
If you ask me...ditch anything you have before 2:09. After that, what you have sounds really good man and imho the "true" song. |
I just wrote a reply and for some reason it didn't come up! Anyway. Yeah, the writings on the wall. I'm gonna piss of the gated synth bit and do a new intro that leads to the first guitar pluck section. Thing is, I'll need to use a synth to support the guitar, but this sound will also have to work within the rest of the track, I don't wanna use the choir pad used in the breakdown, if I can I'd like to leave it just in that section, if I can't come up with something decent I may have to use that sound, but I wanna avoid it sounding like the song playing twice within itself! I'll turn the gated synth bit into another song!
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Feb-14-2015 12:03
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