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TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA

quote:
Originally posted by evo8
its ok but im not sure i would have it on repeat


Thanks Paul for your personal reflection on this production - I guess is just me who this track is touching on deep subconscious level - I guess I'm getting old

Darek


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Oakenshield
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Registered: Oct 2012
Location: Blackpool

its late so il make this quick

i hope i got the damn balence right this time



il give my feedback when im awake and i have a few pages to go back

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Evolve140
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
After all those years and hard work Jesse - finally everything start to paying off - preatty sweet work man

Darek


quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Fukin really good track, this is the best from you in a long time.
Deep, dark, menacing yet eminently danceable.


thanks so much guys! LA is treating me SO WELL. Already found a great job, getting my own place in the next few weeks, totally riding the wave.

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PaULiN0
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Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space

quote:
Originally posted by Oakenshield
its late so il make this quick

i hope i got the damn balence right this time



il give my feedback when im awake and i have a few pages to go back


Mixdown is good...All your bassdrums are also good because they have nice thump to it. The pads at 2:40 needs changing imo, it feels like it doesn't blend well with the intro imo, but its still good. I'm trying to be picky as possible here lol and i can't find anyting else i dont like, so good job.

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Oakenshield
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Registered: Oct 2012
Location: Blackpool

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Originally posted by Evolve140


now thats cool i love how dark it is and the way its mix i can never seem to get my stuff glued like that!

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Evolve140
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Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Denver

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Originally posted by Oakenshield
now thats cool i love how dark it is and the way its mix i can never seem to get my stuff glued like that!


thanks, glad you like it.

well i've been doing this for a little over 10 years now

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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:
Originally posted by PaULiN0
Hmm thanks for your help, I'll remember the day storyteller told me about melodies for a long time, appreciate it.



I've been mentioning this to you for a long time. So far you are making film scores with a kick, not really danceable and there is no melodic hook.

Not saying there is anything wrong with your style but I get the feeling you are wanting to make eDm.

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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:
Originally posted by Oakenshield
its late so il make this quick

i hope i got the damn balence right this time



il give my feedback when im awake and i have a few pages to go back



It sounds kinda old school and very dry. For example the main lead is quite squeaky and basic. Try and make your sounds a lot better and more personalised.

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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Let's put this way - I watch the development of this track right from the moment the idea was born to the final mixing and mastering stages -> and would be a shame to let this incredible and beautiful melodic concept be forgotten.

Please let me know if you share the same appreciation for this track before the abyss of darkens consume it




It is just me or there is something in it to make you listen over and over again !!!!


Darek



Ahh sorry man, not feelin this one, sometimes we attach great emotion to something for oblique personal reasons others just wont pick up on. I get really uplifted looking up into pine trees, people think I'm mad!

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Oakenshield
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quote:
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It sounds kinda old school and very dry. For example the main lead is quite squeaky and basic. Try and make your sounds a lot better and more personalised.


im going for a 90's trance type feel ive not added any effects etc to it yet so it will sound dry how does the mix sound etc?

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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:
Originally posted by Oakenshield
im going for a 90's trance type feel ive not added any effects etc to it yet so it will sound dry how does the mix sound etc?



The mix sounds clear and competent but it lacks any personal love as for me it sounds like GM sounds. This in turn makes it have a clinical lack of atmosphere and so is not danceable.

Last edited by Richard Butler on Sep-26-2014 at 10:39

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optik
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Registered: Jun 2004
Location: oxford

quote:
Originally posted by Oakenshield
its late so il make this quick

i hope i got the damn balence right this time



il give my feedback when im awake and i have a few pages to go back


I quite like the simplicity of the production - quite clean and pretty oldschool sounding. I know this is trance addict, but I would try it a bit slower, maybe 130bpm - the track is a like a sped up deep house track almost

hasn't got the most satisfying low end

brave sounds in the breakdown - it almost works but need a bit more epik - does feel like a completely different track to me.

at 3:55 or so the bass elements of your drone are out of key (which ruins the rest of the track)

has some good bits


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