quote: | Originally posted by TranceLover007
Phil, I can't put my fingers around this track - from one perspective I like this melodic idea but from another, I don't hear anything driving this WIP enough to make me move with it (if you know what I mean).
I would start with this guitar (if this is a guitar?) sound at 0:05 sec mark - I would make sure that this sounds really authentic guitar sounds as this is a part of your primary riff elements. Later on (and here is the part I really have a problem identifying an issue) I would try to find a way of clearly defined rhythm/groove/vibe in your production.
It is only my view on this WIP so please don't take this too serious if you disagree
Cheers,
Darek |
Darek,
So ,the version I uploaded for some reason had the sub off. I as well didnt have a lot of channels on for some reason.
The new one has those "driven" areas addressed.
As for the guitar area...The first guitar you hear is a sample and the second guitar (the scratch strumming) is me.
What I believe you are hearing is the "tube" effect...I could be wrong. Or,were you referring to the progression of the notes?
Another note...I am most certainly sold on this being a vocal track. I am also composing the track in such a manner, meaning that the vox will start at :08 (yes, on it's own it sounds a little off on the beat count,but there is a reason)
The Arp, for now, is a placeholder as I am still auditioning tones but I am thinking it could be a good replacement for a lead. Thus letting the vox stand out more as it is going to need a pretty powerful voice.
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