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gordan100
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Registered: Apr 2011
Location: Zagreb, Croatia
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Phil, that sounds clean and solid, i like it
Darius, you sound like pro dude, that is very nice with a lot of details in composition and sound, serious stuff
This is not that serious, rather simple, also no drums yet just kick, also not really happy with bassline. Any potential here or trash bin?
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Oct-04-2020 00:48
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SystematicX1
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Washington Coast
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quote: | Originally posted by gordan100
Phil, that sounds clean and solid, i like it
Darius, you sound like pro dude, that is very nice with a lot of details in composition and sound, serious stuff
This is not that serious, rather simple, also no drums yet just kick, also not really happy with bassline. Any potential here or trash bin?
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Heya Gordan,
So this piece is quite nice. I do not think that there is anything necessarily wrong with the bassline but I do believe you could take on another feel.
As it stands the bass is acting like a stab that triggers on the main down beat. "If", you were to re arrange your note to not hit on the down beat but rather in between the downbeat of your kick following every kick thereafter you may see that you will gain a different type of "groove". This may help you with gaining more swing from your percussion.
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So, this cut is part 8 of a fourth variant attempt ::rolls eyes:: at a track that was initially started three years ago. For some reason I can't seem to ditch it and always come back because I think it has potential. Now, it seems at the very least I am gaining some gel with this. As it stands, this is really just a bed. Still need some top end melody
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Last edited by SystematicX1 on Oct-05-2020 at 06:59
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Oct-04-2020 18:57
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gordan100
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2011
Location: Zagreb, Croatia
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Thanks Phil, i will try that bass notes rearrangement
quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
So, this cut is part 8 of a fourth variant attempt ::rolls eyes:: at a track that was initially started three years ago. For some reason I can't seem to ditch it and always come back because I think it has potential. Now, it seems at the very least I am gaining some gel with this. As it stands, this is really just a bed. Still need some top end melody
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This is a nice drive so far, def worth more developing!
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Oct-04-2020 19:23
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