Last edited by Hides in Shadow on Jul-24-2019 at 10:27
Jul-20-2019 22:57
evo8
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Originally posted by Hides in Shadow
Finally found some variation in my basses, not just your typical Anjuna roller, more like starecase and added a nice Pad.
this is my favorite track so far..
I actually like the sound of this but I think to complete it, it needs a different bassline as it kinda spoils the groove for me when it comes in
Originally posted by evo8
trying this one, possibly too bassy?
In some ways ...yes. That mid range sub could probably be taken down a few. Kick seems to have this resonance at the tail. Not sure if cutting it would help that or maybe a different one. Dig the vibe though
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Jul-31-2019 21:53
Hides in Shadow
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Originally posted by evo8
I actually like the sound of this but I think to complete it, it needs a different bassline as it kinda spoils the groove for me when it comes in
Yeah, I agree, but much better than the standard Anjuna roller at least, now I can experiment with different variation all while using the same notes. I feel a lot more comfortable now switching it up.
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Originally posted by evo8
trying this one, possibly too bassy?
Sounds even on my 7'' Adams A7X's, no too little, nor too much.
thanks peeps - I actually deleted as soon as I listened on my hifi - the bass is just poking out way too much and the kick seems a bit too heavy, so low end needs some work
My first movie trailer. You can't edit the pans & transitions in this iMovie theme template so if looks like I'm constantly panning onto C&K's boobs, it's unintentional--I would have showcased their sexy legs.
Aug-04-2019 13:55
Hides in Shadow
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Originally posted by Mel David
My first movie trailer. You can't edit the pans & transitions in this iMovie theme template so if looks like I'm constantly panning onto C&K's boobs, it's unintentional--I would have showcased their sexy legs.
That's not bad, I'm liking it man, it looks legitimate to me holmes..
Originally posted by Hides in Shadow
That's not bad, I'm liking it man, it looks legitimate to me holmes..
This seemed a bit lacking to me. That mid section was nice , not to fond of that kick selection and it seemed less lethargic. The minute of atmosphere at the end didn't hold up imo.
Not your best piece Juan but appreciate the creativity. I know there is something in you better
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I am so up and down on this track. Almost ditched it and am trying to work it out and it "seems" like there is an improvement. Undecided if I want to keep that kick
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Aug-25-2019 01:51
Hides in Shadow
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Originally posted by SystematicX1
This seemed a bit lacking to me. That mid section was nice , not to fond of that kick selection and it seemed less lethargic. The minute of atmosphere at the end didn't hold up imo.
Not your best piece Juan but appreciate the creativity. I know there is something in you better
Thanks for your input System...I was working my way around a new a daw on this one, I used bitwig. I think I just might give up on making my own kicks, they always come out like shite I guess. I didn't complete the melody, I'll finish the next time with the chord change I mentioned earlier. Good news is that I moved this project back to Logic and we'll see how it goes from there, cheers man and thanks again...
I'll get to yours in a bit.
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Imo, i think you need a new kick to complement the first in your intro in order to be seamless. At 1:24 is where you can hear the track losing its power from where it started... That is all that i think that needs doing, everything else is fine with me...
Last edited by Hides in Shadow on Aug-25-2019 at 07:22
Aug-25-2019 06:15
gordan100
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Originally posted by SystematicX1
I am so up and down on this track. Almost ditched it and am trying to work it out and it "seems" like there is an improvement. Undecided if I want to keep that kick
I like it. Chords reminds me on Chemical Brothers - Star guitar
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You are finally beyond intro Kick is too boomey, but otherwise it's pretty nice... end is a bit weird