|Originally posted by vercetti |
Falisjesse Sincere: Not that great as idea, polish it all you like and it will still be a filler at best. Burn. Or change the bassline and start rebuilding.
optik - First Class. Probably late to the party, as you said it's the final release. Essentially first minute and a half needs another lead on top of your arp-lead-whatever. Or some other musical content, vocals, whatever. Otherwise just boring. Good mix. Would personally layer piano with a synth lead and fade out at some point, sounds too wimpy on its own imo for aggressive track like this.
Here's the track I've been writing. Personally think it's fucking fantastic but judging own stuff objectively is impossible. Come on, tear it a new arsehole
Lovely track - personal preference for me would be a more sustained type of bassline rather than the individual notes that you currently have, something similar to what optik was saying that it doesnt groove that well for me, my 2c