|Originally posted by evo8 |
yeah, bit of a grower this one, wasnt sure at first on the progression - good job
theres a lot of noise in mix somewhere, id back off on that a bit Andy
also in little breakdowns, i would loop the first 2 bars, dont go into the full progression...just build the fuck out of it and then drop it back in
oh that bit after the final break is really good, sounds really clean, i can hear the bass now - its getting swamped earlier, i think the culprit is some pad or something - keep the pad in but try and EQ it so its not blocking the bassline?
yeah thats my advices , reminds me of Diving Faces a bit - i wouldnt mind having a go at mixing this Andy if your up for that!
Yeah I spent the day on this, I can hear what your saying now after having time away. It all stems from the pads (low mids and highs giving to much noise).
I'm hoping to get a bit time on this over the weekend so i'll see how I get on with it. As for you mixing it well lets see what the end result is like when I get some more done. What you hear atm is really all I have down but yeah I'd be up for that I think.
|Originally posted by Richard Butler |
Really nice Andy, liking those wide subtle synths. IMO it could be better still with slightly more imaginative note placement for the leed as in parts it's a bit repetitive.
I Know I did try at the time but I couldn't get anything to fit so just repeated it but yeah I hear you and agree with this.
|Originally posted by TranceLover007 |
Andy, couple of things which I will try to do before I would go on shopping with this track:
1. I would keep this chords from 7th bar till the 8th bar.
2. in 1:09 (or at least 1:33) I would introduce another instrument (best would be piano) playing some sweet melodic part for more attractiveness.
The rest sound good so far
Cheers Darek, was already thinking about the piano bit but to bring it in at 1:51 :P
|Originally posted by Raphie |
Sounds good andy28, i would adjust the bassline progression a bit so that the 2nd part differs from the first, as a harmony if you will but further great start.
Will give it a go..
Thanks guys for all your ideas and suggestions, will hopefully put them to use in the next couple of days