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Richard Butler
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You guys feedback lead to I think a far better version and better showcase of the analoggggg arp



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I think you're really onto something here.


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SystematicX1
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
You guys feedback lead to I think a far better version and better showcase of the analoggggg arp




There Ya Go! THAT is what I wanted to hear

I am very curious about the kick however, not sure if you played around with it or if is a placeholder or your creative choice using that particular one. Perhaps a different kick with some depth and a more bottom end would help?
Overall at this state I would say a great improvement from the last.


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gordan100
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quote:
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You guys feedback lead to I think a far better version and better showcase of the analoggggg arp




It's nice Rich, cool vibe. Like the subtle phazing/cutoff on synth. Kick sounds maybe a bit out of mix.


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gordan100
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I was playing with this again. Does the bass starting at 0:48 works for you guys?

btw Thanks, Rich for pointing out my annoying synth after 15 sec, i'm doing this all the time not knowing at first


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SystematicX1
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quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
I was playing with this again. Does the bass starting at 0:48 works for you guys?


YES!! And...no.
Yes as in I totally get it and YES! It truly does work.
No as in imo, it should be subtle in the mix and could easily be resolved by volume. I can appreciate the wideness of the tone it is attempting to create but feel you would get more impact by going with less stereo range on that bass. Maybe even a low pass on EQ just to get the subtly and warmth.
Really Really Really dig this and feel it can be a very vibey track


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Welp, I had to make a decision on this track as I keep coming back to it. I made the decision to stick with it but if I were to, things had to change.
After a lot of thought, I made considerable changes in the composition.
Nearly all the beginning percussion is gone and went more atmospheric.
Made some adjustments on the snare and kick end.
Note changes in a few areas but the arrangement remained.
To me, the biggest change came when I felt the track was sluggish. So, I increased the bpm to 128 and feel it has a much better groove to it.
Still needing some work but I feel this is a better iteration.


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gordan100
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quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
YES!! And...no.
Yes as in I totally get it and YES! It truly does work.
No as in imo, it should be subtle in the mix and could easily be resolved by volume. I can appreciate the wideness of the tone it is attempting to create but feel you would get more impact by going with less stereo range on that bass. Maybe even a low pass on EQ just to get the subtly and warmth.
Really Really Really dig this and feel it can be a very vibey track


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Welp, I had to make a decision on this track as I keep coming back to it. I made the decision to stick with it but if I were to, things had to change.
After a lot of thought, I made considerable changes in the composition.
Nearly all the beginning percussion is gone and went more atmospheric.
Made some adjustments on the snare and kick end.
Note changes in a few areas but the arrangement remained.
To me, the biggest change came when I felt the track was sluggish. So, I increased the bpm to 128 and feel it has a much better groove to it.
Still needing some work but I feel this is a better iteration.



Hey thanks, will try how it sounds with a more subtle bass... I like the old and the new beginning. I think you need more lowend from 1:10, and it's a bit to bright in mid-highs imo. I also have a feeling that the kick is slowing down the groove in some parts.


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Richard Butler
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Thanks again, I think kik n sub better now


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Richard Butler
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quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
I was playing with this again. Does the bass starting at 0:48 works for you guys?

btw Thanks, Rich for pointing out my annoying synth after 15 sec, i'm doing this all the time not knowing at first




So I like what you here apart from that bass at 48 but that's just my taste. For me it hampers the groove.


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Richard Butler
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Originally posted by SystematicX1


Welp, I had to make a decision on this track as I keep coming back to it. I made the decision to stick with it but if I were to, things had to change.
After a lot of thought, I made considerable changes in the composition.
Nearly all the beginning percussion is gone and went more atmospheric.
Made some adjustments on the snare and kick end.
Note changes in a few areas but the arrangement remained.
To me, the biggest change came when I felt the track was sluggish. So, I increased the bpm to 128 and feel it has a much better groove to it.
Still needing some work but I feel this is a better iteration.




Not really getting this one mate. At 1.08 I was wanting a nice bass but on computer speakers I can only here a lead synth and drums.


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Richard Butler
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Is this drop ok without hatz or should I add some?


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gordan100
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Is this drop ok without hatz or should I add some?



Sounds fine without hats to me. I like chopped voices you have, bass, it has a groove. First 4 bars of melody (0:46 - 0:52) are nice to me then it goes in different direction than i would like. Snare transition from 1:22 - 1:38 is not my favorite too, but that's more a general dislike about that kind of transitions than a critique of your track.


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