Originally posted by Juan Paulino
Just finished this tune in a lot of hours. Its raw as fuck. The breakdown melody is tuned out of key little bit so I'l fix that later but could you comment other things as well.
The sample that starts at 1.17 doesn't really fit with the rest IMO, also sounds slightly out of tune. The break is an absolute turd. Can't say anything about the mix, on laptop speakers atm.
Originally posted by Deillon
It's not out of tune anymore, but the break is still a single-note pad with a choir behind it and 3 times the same riser and cymbal effect. I don't think it is interesting enough.
Thanks Mr Deillon, will add more elements and see what i can do.