Become a part of the TranceAddict community! Frequently Asked Questions - Please read this if you haven'tSearch the forums
TranceAddict Forums > DJing / Production / Promotion > Production Studio > WIP thread (Banned Users: DJRYAN)
Pages (537): « 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 [148] 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178 179 180 181 182 183 184 185 186 187 188 189 190 191 192 193 194 195 196 197 198 199 200 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 210 211 212 213 214 215 216 217 218 219 220 221 222 223 224 225 226 227 228 229 230 231 232 233 234 235 236 237 238 239 240 241 242 243 244 245 246 247 248 249 250 251 252 253 254 255 256 257 258 259 260 261 262 263 264 265 266 267 268 269 270 271 272 273 274 275 276 277 278 279 280 281 282 283 284 285 286 287 288 289 290 291 292 293 294 295 296 297 298 299 300 301 302 303 304 305 306 307 308 309 310 311 312 313 314 315 316 317 318 319 320 321 322 323 324 325 326 327 328 329 330 331 332 333 334 335 336 337 338 339 340 341 342 343 344 345 346 347 348 349 350 351 352 353 354 355 356 357 358 359 360 361 362 363 364 365 366 367 368 369 370 371 372 373 374 375 376 377 378 379 380 381 382 383 384 385 386 387 388 389 390 391 392 393 394 395 396 397 398 399 400 401 402 403 404 405 406 407 408 409 410 411 412 413 414 415 416 417 418 419 420 421 422 423 424 425 426 427 428 429 430 431 432 433 434 435 436 437 438 439 440 441 442 443 444 445 446 447 448 449 450 451 452 453 454 455 456 457 458 459 460 461 462 463 464 465 466 467 468 469 470 471 472 473 474 475 476 477 478 479 480 481 482 483 484 485 486 487 488 489 490 491 492 493 494 495 496 497 498 499 500 501 502 503 504 505 506 507 508 509 510 511 512 513 514 515 516 517 518 519 520 521 522 523 524 525 526 527 528 529 530 531 532 533 534 535 536 537 »   Last Thread   Next Thread
Author
Thread    Post A Reply
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..



Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space

quote:
Originally posted by Storyteller

@optik: The theme doesn't really work for me. It feels too generic. The mixdown needs a lot of attention. The kick feels way too oldschool for the rest, I miss a lot of separation between sounds in the high end, it's one big mush.


+1


___________________


Old Post Apr-27-2014 19:32  United States
Click Here to See the Profile for PaULiN0 Click here to Send PaULiN0 a Private Message Add PaULiN0 to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
optik
Supreme tranceaddict



Registered: Jun 2004
Location: oxford

quote:
Originally posted by PaULiN0
No sorry I'm not writing techno, and please try not take my joke seriously okay?

Thanks.


it's either that or take some music theory and practice lessons - I am right that you don't play an instrument aren't I?

I didn't say write techno to be rude, just that the genre you have attempted requires a certain amount of musicality - this can either be innate or you can learn it. I don't think you'd be arsed to learn it, so techno would be a good genre as it mainly needs good drums and bassline and requires less tonal musicality.

just trying to help

T


___________________
If I've been helpful and you have a spare minute, check out my soundcloud; clubshark soundcloud
http://www.clubsharkrecords.com

Old Post Apr-27-2014 22:34  United Kingdom
Click Here to See the Profile for optik Click here to Send optik a Private Message Visit optik's homepage! Add optik to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..



Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space

quote:
Originally posted by optik
it's either that or take some music theory and practice lessons - I am right that you don't play an instrument aren't I?

I didn't say write techno to be rude, just that the genre you have attempted requires a certain amount of musicality - this can either be innate or you can learn it. I don't think you'd be arsed to learn it, so techno would be a good genre as it mainly needs good drums and bassline and requires less tonal musicality.

just trying to help

T


Its my 2nd year in and I know about theory. Not all my instruments and synths have be in the same key. Some are and some aren't if you take another listen if you mind almost everything is spanning dif keys form one scale because I try to make it interesting as possible.. I listen to your stuff and you know you damn well sound everyone tries to sound like. Very generic, with hardly anything going on. You should try to make switch to europop no? its real simple . Um, sorry i dont want to sound harsh either but take it for my example. I still have a long way to go and its not there's a deadline and i need to switch genres immediately like you advised. I'm here to stay, thanks.


___________________


Old Post Apr-28-2014 16:07  United States
Click Here to See the Profile for PaULiN0 Click here to Send PaULiN0 a Private Message Add PaULiN0 to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
junkproject
Supreme tranceaddict



Registered: Nov 2003
Location: Irvine

quote:
Originally posted by clay
thats horrible

I agree.

Old Post Apr-28-2014 18:18  United States
Click Here to See the Profile for junkproject Click here to Send junkproject a Private Message Add junkproject to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..



Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space

quote:
Originally posted by junkproject
I agree.


Lets see you post something.


___________________


Old Post Apr-28-2014 18:24  United States
Click Here to See the Profile for PaULiN0 Click here to Send PaULiN0 a Private Message Add PaULiN0 to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
optik
Supreme tranceaddict



Registered: Jun 2004
Location: oxford

quote:
Originally posted by PaULiN0
Its my 2nd year in and I know about theory. Not all my instruments and synths have be in the same key. Some are and some aren't if you take another listen if you mind almost everything is spanning dif keys form one scale because I try to make it interesting as possible.. I listen to your stuff and you know you damn well sound everyone tries to sound like. Very generic, with hardly anything going on. You should try to make switch to europop no? its real simple . Um, sorry i dont want to sound harsh either but take it for my example. I still have a long way to go and its not there's a deadline and i need to switch genres immediately like you advised. I'm here to stay, thanks.


you sound like a petulant child. lolz.

no more responses for you


___________________
If I've been helpful and you have a spare minute, check out my soundcloud; clubshark soundcloud
http://www.clubsharkrecords.com

Old Post Apr-28-2014 18:35  United Kingdom
Click Here to See the Profile for optik Click here to Send optik a Private Message Visit optik's homepage! Add optik to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..



Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space

quote:
Originally posted by optik
you sound like a petulant child. lolz.

no more responses for you


I knew you would revert to say something like that on which you can't back up on your own songs. I feel thankful for you not to want to respond to any of my snips because your overall take on the trance genre is like what was said about you, generic. Have a nice day.

Carry on


___________________


Old Post Apr-28-2014 18:48  United States
Click Here to See the Profile for PaULiN0 Click here to Send PaULiN0 a Private Message Add PaULiN0 to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
Deillon
Supreme tranceaddict



Registered: Apr 2012
Location: Amsterdam

Paulino, I have to agree with optik, your sound design is great, so is your mixing. But there are some melodic parts clashing with each other.


___________________
Soundcloud

Old Post Apr-28-2014 19:20  Netherlands
Click Here to See the Profile for Deillon Click here to Send Deillon a Private Message Add Deillon to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..



Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space

How about now?


___________________


Old Post Apr-28-2014 19:38  United States
Click Here to See the Profile for PaULiN0 Click here to Send PaULiN0 a Private Message Add PaULiN0 to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
Deillon
Supreme tranceaddict



Registered: Apr 2012
Location: Amsterdam

The bassline still sounds off.


___________________
Soundcloud

Old Post Apr-28-2014 20:00  Netherlands
Click Here to See the Profile for Deillon Click here to Send Deillon a Private Message Add Deillon to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
PaULiN0
Twinkle, Twinkle..



Registered: Mar 2014
Location: Outer Space

Which one?

Have another listen please.


___________________


Last edited by PaULiN0 on Apr-28-2014 at 20:11

Old Post Apr-28-2014 20:02  United States
Click Here to See the Profile for PaULiN0 Click here to Send PaULiN0 a Private Message Add PaULiN0 to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message
Trancelover03591
Trained tranceaddict



Registered: Feb 2011
Location: Southern California

quote:
Originally posted by PaULiN0
How about now?



I think the mixing and sound design are pretty good. I listen to a lot of WIPs and yours is on the more pleasant and balanced end. However it is a safe song and it isn't incredibly original. I don't know how much of it is loops or whatever, but all I can say is not bad, but there is a lot of room for creating a more sophisticated song structurally and musically.


___________________
Songwriter/artist and reluctant producer.

My Soundcloud

Old Post Apr-28-2014 21:39  United States
Click Here to See the Profile for Trancelover03591 Click here to Send Trancelover03591 a Private Message Add Trancelover03591 to your buddy list Report this Post Reply w/Quote Edit/Delete Message

TranceAddict Forums > DJing / Production / Promotion > Production Studio > WIP thread (Banned Users: DJRYAN)
Post New Thread    Post A Reply

Pages (537): « 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 [148] 149 150 151 152 153 154 155 156 157 158 159 160 161 162 163 164 165 166 167 168 169 170 171 172 173 174 175 176 177 178 179 180 181 182 183 184 185 186 187 188 189 190 191 192 193 194 195 196 197 198 199 200 201 202 203 204 205 206 207 208 209 210 211 212 213 214 215 216 217 218 219 220 221 222 223 224 225 226 227 228 229 230 231 232 233 234 235 236 237 238 239 240 241 242 243 244 245 246 247 248 249 250 251 252 253 254 255 256 257 258 259 260 261 262 263 264 265 266 267 268 269 270 271 272 273 274 275 276 277 278 279 280 281 282 283 284 285 286 287 288 289 290 291 292 293 294 295 296 297 298 299 300 301 302 303 304 305 306 307 308 309 310 311 312 313 314 315 316 317 318 319 320 321 322 323 324 325 326 327 328 329 330 331 332 333 334 335 336 337 338 339 340 341 342 343 344 345 346 347 348 349 350 351 352 353 354 355 356 357 358 359 360 361 362 363 364 365 366 367 368 369 370 371 372 373 374 375 376 377 378 379 380 381 382 383 384 385 386 387 388 389 390 391 392 393 394 395 396 397 398 399 400 401 402 403 404 405 406 407 408 409 410 411 412 413 414 415 416 417 418 419 420 421 422 423 424 425 426 427 428 429 430 431 432 433 434 435 436 437 438 439 440 441 442 443 444 445 446 447 448 449 450 451 452 453 454 455 456 457 458 459 460 461 462 463 464 465 466 467 468 469 470 471 472 473 474 475 476 477 478 479 480 481 482 483 484 485 486 487 488 489 490 491 492 493 494 495 496 497 498 499 500 501 502 503 504 505 506 507 508 509 510 511 512 513 514 515 516 517 518 519 520 521 522 523 524 525 526 527 528 529 530 531 532 533 534 535 536 537 »  
Last Thread   Next Thread
Show Printable Version | Subscribe to this Thread

Forum Jump:

All times are GMT. The time now is 17:50.

Forum Rules:
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is ON
vB code is ON
[IMG] code is ON
 
Search this Thread:

 
Contact Us - return to tranceaddict

Powered by: Trance Music & vBulletin Forums
Copyright ©2000-2019

Privacy Statement / DMCA