I think the snare needs to be turned up some, and the sub bass might be a little too low (so maybe the whole track needs to come up a few notes). Also, I think it needs more elements, or a change up in the structure so it isn't too repetitive.
I always like listening to your tracks. Some really high quality production work. As long as this one continues to build and is structured right it should be a good techno track.
I don't think many active members listen to or produce much 'house' music on Tranceaddict, but any advice on this track is appreciated. I have been watching a lot of tutorials and reading about the technical side of production lately, with a focus on synth creation and selection, as I think it has been my biggest weakness since I started producing. I used a tutorial to make the synth playing at the beginning on Synth1, a freeware synth. Also, I used a tutorial to make the bass at the climax, a very common bass I have tried to make many times. This starts at the second breakdown and goes through the second climax and into the outro.
Songwriter/artist and reluctant producer.