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TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA

quote:
Originally posted by Seandroid
....... Whoa - thanks dude!! Yeah, there is more vocal stuff later. I just added the chorus actually if you play the same embed above again.


Just went through it few sec ago and really like it but if you are open to some suggestions (ignore if you have a complete different view on it lol) I would recommend to make some adjustment to your remix:

1) 0:54 introduce some massive lead with melody or arp to get you through 1:12 break - because at 1:12 sounds really unfinished/dry.

2) 1:30 you need to add some nice vocal FX to this second part of your track as this would drive (your vocal) this whole track creativity/vibe.

just my 0.02$

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Seandroid
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Registered: Oct 2010
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quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Just went through it few sec ago and really like it but if you are open to some suggestions (ignore if you have a complete different view on it lol) I would recommend to make some adjustment to your remix:

1) 0:54 introduce some massive lead with melody or arp to get you through 1:12 break - because at 1:12 sounds really unfinished/dry.

2) 1:30 you need to add some nice vocal FX to this second part of your track as this would drive (your vocal) this whole track creativity/vibe.

just my 0.02$

Darek


Oh, yeah, that part of the song is super unfinished, I was just letting you know there is more vocal stuff coming. I just replaced the file to show the actual artist what I was doing with the chorus but figured i'd point it out to you since you mentioned having more vocals.


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Originally posted by deegee
Dude, if you're going to be so aggressively resistant to any and all criticism, why do you post in this thread?

I think you have absolutely lovely sound design. All your sounds are crisp and clear--someone with better speakers can talk about the nitty gritty of your mixing, but for me it's very well done.

The problem is, that's about all you're doing. Which is a shame, because it sounds to me like there's talent there just waiting to take advantage of the technical know-how.

There's a lot of people here trying to give you constructive and useful feedback on how to improve what you do. Maybe try listening to what we're saying.

madmuso, I'll say the same thing I said in the other thread: the moment your vocals come in, the energy of the track dies. It gets very oompa oompa--maybe sidechaining that's gone too far.


Man cmon, i was justing trying to get my kick and bass right because i been doing it wrong ever since, thats all no offense.

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Then wouldn't it make more sense to go back and fix the one that had already been crituqued? Again, if it was just a technical exercise it's not actually a work in progress. It's a useful thing to do, sure, but as I understand it this thread is for stuff that's basically there and needs some polishing.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Which one? lol


This compared to that.



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Originally posted by deegee
Then wouldn't it make more sense to go back and fix the one that had already been crituqued? Again, if it was just a technical exercise it's not actually a work in progress. It's a useful thing to do, sure, but as I understand it this thread is for stuff that's basically there and needs some polishing.


Yeah I shoulda of fixed the original whip, I was just scared of peeps complaining that i post the same whip over and over again so I made a new one. It just mis communication is all.

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TranceLover007
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quote:
Originally posted by Seandroid
Oh, yeah, that part of the song is super unfinished, I was just letting you know there is more vocal stuff coming. I just replaced the file to show the actual artist what I was doing with the chorus but figured i'd point it out to you since you mentioned having more vocals.


Got'ya.

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quote:
Originally posted by Innocence Lost
This compared to that.





If you ask me for a kick recommendation - I would go with "Juanathon Targaryen
Paulino - Twin Hearts " - feels like belongs there now

Cheers man.

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quote:
Originally posted by Seandroid


Really like the climax at :37. This isn't an 'issue' but the bpm is low enough to make playing it difficult for some DJs.


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Originally posted by Storyteller



A complete overhaul of the remix I posted several weeks ago. Not really happy about this yet. Some parts progress too little and others too fast making it feel a bit incoherent to me. But I know where I want to go with it so I'm guessing it will all be alright. Some feedback would be nice.


I like the intro chord progression. That could be the starting point for another remix I think. I think you have really good/pro sound design in just about everything you make including this. Some of your recent stuff like this one, runs on the more "mellow" side I would say. It is good, but not necessarily thaaat interesting to me.


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quote:
Originally posted by Innocence Lost
This compared to that.





I think these are by and large relatively generic progtrance from about 10 years ago. They are well mixed in my opinion, and the sound design, albeit dated, always seem OK to me. I don't know if I have ever heard a full song from you. I like your kick on A New Dimension (though the title is ironic in that I find the style antithetical to new), and in the production world, that is a pretty big compliment. I'd like to hear a finished track from you, with a little more originality.


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quote:
Originally posted by Trancelover03591
Really like the climax at :37. This isn't an 'issue' but the bpm is low enough to make playing it difficult for some DJs.


It's actually really trendy. Recess by Skrillex, Dillon Francis's stuff, Rock & Roll, One Click Headshot & No Grip by Feed Me, among others. It's called "moombahton" or "mid-tempo." Sometimes even just "110."


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