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Richard Butler
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I'm thinking over your bass question, in the meantime........

I have this, quickest thing I ever made. I am determined to keep it simple and not add much to it, as per the thread here on keeping it simple;


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vercetti
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler

I have this, quickest thing I ever made. I am determined to keep it simple and not add much to it, as per the thread here on keeping it simple;



Yeah you don't need to add stuff, you may need some deleted though.
The mix is crap at the moment, major work there, and probably some arrangement work with the elements you already have in the track. There are things that jump out a lot, like
28s stutter edit is fucking nasty and needs heavy filtering and/or deletion, couple of sounds at 1:10 way too loud, 2:49 stutter edit too harsh in the top end, needs filtering, etc etc.

Having said all that. The idea of the tune itself is very decent, I mean if you polish it well could be good.


Here's my tune in need of feedback:

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Mr.Mystery
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I have this, quickest thing I ever made. I am determined to keep it simple and not add much to it, as per the thread here on keeping it simple;

Like vercetti said, the tune itself sounds really nice, but some of those effects were really quite harsh, especially on headphones. The vocals don't seem to sit right in the mix either.

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deegee
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quote:
Originally posted by vercetti

Here's my tune in need of feedback:


That piano line is beautiful. Not sure I'm wild about when it jumps an octave, much better when the lower octave comes back in. Minor quibble though.

For some reason I can almost hear lyrics sitting over this--similar to Everything But The Girl, maybe.

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madmuso
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Location: Melbourne

quote:
Originally posted by vercetti
Yeah you don't need to add stuff, you may need some deleted though.
The mix is crap at the moment, major work there, and probably some arrangement work with the elements you already have in the track. There are things that jump out a lot, like
28s stutter edit is fucking nasty and needs heavy filtering and/or deletion, couple of sounds at 1:10 way too loud, 2:49 stutter edit too harsh in the top end, needs filtering, etc etc.

Having said all that. The idea of the tune itself is very decent, I mean if you polish it well could be good.


Here's my tune in need of feedback:



dig this, as a piano player I really liked the piano lines. I would maybe eq a little out of the mids and/or low mids of the piano. The only thing that kinda killed the mood for me was when the 16th note closed hats came in, for me they are to straight adn killed the groove of the song, maybe try some simpler closed hat stuff bussed to a delay to get some kind of cool shuffle and movement that works with the rest of the groove, just doesnt sit right for me. But thats just me!

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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'm thinking over your bass question, in the meantime........

I have this, quickest thing I ever made. I am determined to keep it simple and not add much to it, as per the thread here on keeping it simple;



pretty good Rich, bops along nicely - the fx and stuff are mixed ok to my ears


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Originally posted by vercetti
Yeah you don't need to add stuff, you may need some deleted though.
The mix is crap at the moment, major work there, and probably some arrangement work with the elements you already have in the track. There are things that jump out a lot, like
28s stutter edit is fucking nasty and needs heavy filtering and/or deletion, couple of sounds at 1:10 way too loud, 2:49 stutter edit too harsh in the top end, needs filtering, etc etc.

Having said all that. The idea of the tune itself is very decent, I mean if you polish it well could be good.


Here's my tune in need of feedback:



kinda strange sound on this one, could almost be background for a tv program or something, not sure what else to say about it!


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Mise
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quote:
Originally posted by vercetti


Here's my tune in need of feedback:



I like the track, specially the piano melody, it has a pop/rock vibe. The call and response, the more dreamy piano does is spot on. The paned cymbals are to much at the front for my taste, the bass is grooving but it is taking to much space in the mix imo.


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Andy28
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A nice listen, it reminds me a hell of a lot of Solarstone vs Scott Bond - 3rd Earth.

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matuto
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quote:
Originally posted by vercetti
Here's my tune in need of feedback:



Really good stuff nothing to be changed imho..

Here is something im currently working on:

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Richard Butler
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Originally posted by vercetti

Here's my tune in need of feedback:




The interesting part here is break 1 with the piano and stab although one stab note is off the last in the cycle).
That could be a great tune, but the rest for me is not so interesting although I can hear some very decent background atmospheric pad work.


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Richard Butler
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Originally posted by matuto
Really good stuff nothing to be changed imho..

Here is something im currently working on:




Personally it doesn't grab be in a dance sense but none the less it is quite intriguing with the way you play the bass, the decent percs and the bit crushed melodic lines.

Seems well mixed to me. maybe some sort of vocal stab would lift it some?


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