|Originally posted by Richard Butler |
Here's an EDM style track - could you tell me if it would be better with more vocals?
Are the 2 rises out of the breaks good enough?
Rich im not an EDM fan but this sounds good, i clicked play and instantly thought "EDM", thats before i read the comment
i think that you are almost changing the structure too much, you need to let some bits just loop a bit more, absolutely no harm in that, otherwise people just cant get into the groove as it keeps changing
e.g 4:13 onwards, i feel you could loop those first 2 bars again - then maybe throw in your change in the next loop around? but i understand if thats the style you intend!
vox - i dont think this needs any, better without imo
break at 2 mins, thats too long imo for that point in the track
leading into the main break you could send some of the main synth to a big delay, let that wash out whilst bringing the main synth back up
also not sure the pre-drop works the best (snares) - id try a synth stutter, like playing your main synth loop whilst progressively shortening the loop points (old djm600 trick)
sorry, i wrote too much. your kicks have good depth now (finally )