|Originally posted by chris marsh |
Tricky one this.
On the one hand there's a performance in there that's working. I wouldn't worry too much about the tuning issues either as they're easily ironed out and unless you're sitting there in the studio doing comps you're going to have to tidy things up a little.
I'm not sold on the processing. It's a fairly metallic reverb/delay combo you have going there, and probably too much of it. I also feel you could EQ the vocal a little better. Can you post the dry vocal to listen to?
Vocals are tricky to get right, but I think it's worth persevering.
|Originally posted by jf2010 |
Been messing around with the midi of 3rd Moon - DNA and came up with this, just the main section & outro done yet, goes a bit strange after the melody just started messing with stuff, see what ye think ..
I like what you've done so far, but I think some tweaks would be beneficial.
I think that main lead is a little monotonous right now and could use some modulation, filter work etc. The hats and percussion feel a little confined and mooshed together, like it's just a couple of loops stacked on top of each other. I do it all the time but i'm trying to get out of the habit and start creating hats from scratch for ultimate control.
I also think the sub is a little too overpowering and perhaps the mid highs are a little too prominent overall.
Nice oldskool vibe though, which I always approve of
Last edited by tehlord on Nov-01-2013 at 00:12