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gordan100
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2011
Location: Zagreb, Croatia
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quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
I decided to pull this out after many months and wanted to give it another go and at the very least finish the track.
Although there is a lot of tightening I need to do on it,it is almost there.
This is a remix for Adventure club's song Gold. Oddly enough as much as the original is uplifting, this piece is and has a very melancholy and somber vibe.
Always debated if it was worth the effort.
(the ending has some weird cuts, I do recognize them...just wanted to get a feeling for the end)
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You should finish this, sounds good...
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Jul-27-2015 23:19
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gordan100
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2011
Location: Zagreb, Croatia
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quote: | Originally posted by SystematicX1
:32 second mark, build around this.
Although simple, its your hook.
Just a suggestion, change that sub bass tone. Its absorbing all your lower frequency and making it muddy. The progression is fine and is more cohesive at the 2:09 mark.
Lower your notes in your piano roll on that bassline at 3:30 bassline
Personally, I think you have got something with this track. |
Hey, thanks! And thanks for all the advices.
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Jul-27-2015 23:51
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