|Originally posted by TranceElevation |
It has potential, but there are some objective errors which could massively improve it. As a start I'd lower that sort of a bass an octave down. And remove that low layer you got going on.
I should probably have lowered that bass in a earlier stage. It sounded better in a way, but it would be a lot of work to make it fit now. Thanks for your suggestion though, will take that with me. If you have anything more on your mind, objective or not, I would appreciate to hear about it.
|Originally posted by Richard Butler |
I'd say call it a day, you've given your best shot, spent a lot of time on it, time to move on. I like the way you use only a few elements at once but I would just suggest you make them more interesting - listen to some up to date trap for ideas of leads etc.
Thanks, you are right. I will leave it as it is. Some of the sounds are pretty bad, cant argue with that. Hopefully I can present something better in the future.